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Winters End

Decade
         solid 
                solitary 
                          years

Finally, 
         the 
              season
                       winter
                                ends . . .

With only sunsets beside my bed, 
I sleep and wake up alone.
More than dozens,
I cried a river to scream my fret
for long long years, 
I am committed, yet I walked alone.

Ice drizzled during the days 
then it turned to  hails 
to cubes 
and  to iceberg..

U.N.B.R.E.A.K.A.B.L.E.

Days   are   boiling--
It   welcomes summer for partnered swims.
I invited you but so sad you said a straight: "NO."
Hence by myself, I went to dive on ocean blue.
Years later, we both smell a baby's breath, one then two.
but still, it did nothing to resuscitate a love to bloom, true...

I shiver with the coldness mirrored on your stares,
my joints and muscles quiver 
as I reach a state of hypothermia.

      Yearning    and       wanting...

                   I
                dare 
            to embrace  
    you    a      little     while
like the snow melting under sun's glare, 
oh! so slowly, you thaw my longing.

We are just a room apart 
     yet our feet seems frozen to start...
Not even once, we came to meet. 
No talks. No grins. No hugs. No kiss.
Have our marriage years gone tarry
for just long ago, I agree to tie an endless love with you...?
What had happened, 
Tearless now, but let me know!!!
Did Frosty the Snowman steal you from me?!

I followed Santa Claus advice 
to be nice and never naughty.
I tried to be an angel--
with a halo never with a horn or tail.

Yet, I view the rolling years of us being together
all I can see is a steadfast rainfall of snowflakes...
Penetrating in between skinfolds 
Containing me in a cold volcanic tremors.

Until one day, God must have heard me: 
He answered my prayer allowing me to see
a lady candle's light: a window of hope.

Then lately, my frost clad self defrosts as she touched me.
She, surging strips of shine, her aura a blanket of warmth.
Pliant, she painted a portrait of sunshine into my daily life.
When I lay my head on bed sharp ten o'clock at night,
I see outside the blinking stars and the crescent moon.

Has blossoms of spring started to sprout within my days?
For no longer I shiver with absolute zero coldness rather
I triple tremble in tempo to meet my hearts hot demand
a final adieu to winters icy loveless land.
as lately somebody has taken hold of my hand..

I bask with the squeeze I received
for I found out, our hands, fit in one weave...

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Ebbs Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 7:11 AM
Nicely done, congrats on your wind :)
Haight Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 6:13 PM
Wonderful poem and presentation, Olive. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Lawless Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 5:27 PM
Well Done Olive - congrats on the top.
A   Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 3:00 PM
Olive, Congratulations in "Winters End contest." Have a nice day. LINDA
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 11:40 AM
An epic write Olive - many congrats on your place at the top of the podium:-) hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 10:55 AM
Ps... Congratulations <3 thank you 4 supporting my "Winters End" contest. Forever ~SKAT~
A  Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 10:52 AM
wow, OLIVE:) I'm super impressed, this was your poem. I read the poem out loud twice. I super love this one. It was a tough choice because I don't like poems when posted zig zag, I guess cuz I get lost along the way. But, I super love the way every line fell. It made reading the poem fun. Glad you found that one hand to squeeze. Hugs................... SKAT
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 5:26 AM
Thanks much Skat for picking my winter's end entry as top spot.. :) I am really inspired when I made this one.. :)! thanks much!
Roper Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 4:51 PM
What a wonderful poem, :) a 7
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 9:38 AM
Thanks much Eve.. :)! Your poems are wonderful too.
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 8:00 PM
gosh, Olive, this is indeed EPIC. It is exactly what Skat likes and I bet she is gong to place it right at the top. Very interesting formatting and lovely descriptions.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 6:36 AM
Thanks much Andie.. :) I appreciate your comment.. :)! I hope I really get this time the true way of doing an epic poem.. :D! this my second try.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 12:06 AM
Now this is epic poetry, Olive...great from start to finish! You really put your heart into your write...best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Rhonda
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 4:48 AM
Thanks much RHonda.. :) God bless you always.. :)!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 6:31 PM
This is an exceptional piece of poetry. 7777777777777! I am mezmerized!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 1:54 AM
Thanks much Richard.. :)! I appreciate your comment.. :)!
Fraser Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 4:20 PM
Lonely days through lonely Winters nights, no light at the end of the tunnel to future loves right. Then along came Vulcan tremors releasing fissures of hope, goodbye Wintry days my hearts in love, I'll no longer mope. Now this poetry I so enjoyed Olive, another joy from your pen, James :) x :)
Fraser Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 1:02 PM
Always :)x:)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 8:05 AM
thanks much James.. :)! i appreciate always your generous remarks on my poem. :) thanks for the constant inspiration by your comments.:)!
Yvonne Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 4:17 PM
Wow this really was epic, great write!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 7:57 AM
thanks much Maurice.. :)!
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