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Winter's Deadly Chill

Winter has a deadly chill Whereas just six months prior The earth felt like a blazing fire Unbearable heat didn’t seem that sweet until Our toes no longer we could feel Bitterly bundled up, with long desire For sunshine, causing skin to perspire. But now all bundled in bed, street are still Except for the wind that comes gushing in, Roaring and howling, disrupting the peace; So violently evil, it pierces our skin; So oppressive it weighs down and won’t release Us from the bondage; a parallel storm within. So in ardence we pray and plead for winter to cease!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/6/2017 3:56:00 AM
I love the way this rhymes so well. The contrasts are well described. Well done.
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Date: 1/6/2017 1:45:00 AM
nice poem++++ congrats, Isaac+++
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Date: 1/5/2017 6:54:00 PM
My thoughts of winter, exactly! So well expressed.
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Date: 1/2/2017 1:30:00 PM
Isaac, a big CONGRATULATIONS on having this wonderful write selected as a Feature Poem of the week~
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Date: 1/2/2017 10:08:00 AM
Awesome read. Hit the descriptions on the head..so many of us (myself included) can relate to the exact feeling you painted. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. C.W. Buxton
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Date: 5/12/2016 11:15:00 AM
Isaac, the imagery is great. LINDA
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Date: 5/12/2016 8:31:00 AM
that is deep and chilling. SKAT
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Isaac Abinante
Date: 5/12/2016 11:23:00 AM
Thanks, I tried to make it that way... :)

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