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Winter's Bright

. Attached to mine paw his twice As his smile lit the winter's bright

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/6/2013 8:41:00 PM

There's so much love when you write about Noah and I'm glad I recognize this too. Whatever will you do when he grows up. So nice to see you writing again James, I've missed you! Love, Elizabeth

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/6/2013 10:21:00 AM

this must be about Noah.I know what it means now to feel the joy of having a child..lovely..keep the pen flowing

Daver Austin

Date: 2/6/2013 9:50:00 AM

Hi, Sir James. I have been having eye problems - watery eyes to the point it is hard to read. I think about your writing often and am so glad you are not fed up with me. Your son-loving poems are beautiful because of the unique way you have with expression, an almost extrension of Haiku and Tanka, but when you use it, a better kind of form. Love, daver

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/5/2013 4:25:00 AM

hi James,, this creates so much imagery, enjoyed...