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Wintered Rings of Saturn

the story's spoke the songs she wrote the long walks up the stairway "I think i'll wear flair today" Nothing really matters today The storms she loved The love she stormed Swarm the days alarm you were mint, i was orange I meant I enjoyed the way we formed Admittedly we were children of **** Late night fiilms and corn an appetite for the born slowly, calm down go so slow now You were a sunrise I was a frown It was sunset where do we go now There was a time we unraveled with sand When life resembled a portion of gravel at hand charm was something you endured but i didn't have "to be," was something you'd taste But i couldn't grasp so now it's back to old pen and pad You were a dear old lad Spinely, unwinding Down Here before Must we visit once more storms now surround saturn as they did when we were around that pattern Venus peers from a distance My hair extends but theres just something about wisdom No ones going home A song for the known No ones going home just a disarray of a promise never shown

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Date: 5/1/2010 11:52:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jerry. Have a nice weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2010 1:19:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in an interesting pattern...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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