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Winter Walk and Sounds

As I listened to the snow crunch under my feet, I walked up the hill toward the setting sun A wind chime still hanging, slowly sang in the breeze Between the chirps of birds visiting the feeder Thin layers of ice cracked between tall trees I looked at the light, blinding to see Then I stood still with a breath of cold air Momentarily frozen in time, listening to winter’s sounds As peace engulfed me, I became part of the hill, The snow and the light upon me Heidi Sands 1/10/23

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Date: 1/11/2023 7:09:00 PM
'Becoming part of that hill' is wonderful, as long as it doesn't mean that you're frozen! Stay warm there in NH. :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/11/2023 8:02:00 PM
Lol. Thanks for the laugh, Gershon. Well , we had very many mild days , but today was 17. A storm with a mix and mess will come tomorrow. I hope you stay warm too :)
Date: 1/10/2023 5:36:00 PM
Beautiful imagery throughout. You have blissful nature around you.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/10/2023 7:34:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. I am grateful for that and your kind support :)
Date: 1/10/2023 5:29:00 PM
The way you enveloped yourself in this mesmerizing winter scenery, totally engulfed and warmed me with its soothing beauty, Heidi!!...ab
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/10/2023 7:33:00 PM
Thank you very much for the nice comment on this :)
Date: 1/10/2023 2:45:00 PM
What a beautiful winter scene you paint with your words Heidi. Tom
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Date: 1/10/2023 3:46:00 PM
Thank you Tom. We have been very fortunate to have mild weather with pretty snow. It has been beautiful. I have taken a lot of photos. I hope all is well for you :)

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