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Winter Sonata

In the landscape of melancholy, where arctic heartbeats linger, I long for withered willows to blossom like speckled diamond petals, while your crystalline silhouette strolls through tangled tunnels of my weathered mind. And I question the highest choir orchestrating ethereal anthems: What if there’s no right key to harmonize this undying yearning? What if love had a voice? Would it be an echo of melting snow— thawing glacier hearts to stream upon silver lakes, mirroring drifting clouds of memories that drizzle rose-tinted flakes? There, the crisp air whispers magical tales chauffeured in cashmere cadence. But, like the golden tendrils of winter jasmine, my fingers stretch beyond fogs of frozen rainbows, sketching sweet-scented dreams across skies in porcelain pigments, as your voice glimmers and glows amidst poetic pearls resting on your lyrical lips, shifting through colors of the seasonal breeze, serenading symphonies for soulmates. So let me undress the wintry wisps of vanilla, cloaking the citrine threads of sunrise in your eyes, listening to the song of the wind that shrouds our unsung sonatas when we were undone. For you and I, we are like jewels in the azure, ruminating in rhymes, quilted in a secluded igloo, as chickadees of the night chirp in sync with the moon, mimicking hymns from the hypnotic lyre of Orpheus, to which Eurydice waltzed, even the waning stars would unravel a sequined staircase to the gardens above the highest spheres. For I would die a million deaths to rewind and replay the dulcet chorus of this immortal romance.

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Date: 1/16/2024 4:43:00 PM
Congrats on being the number one new poem. Well deserved.
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Date: 1/15/2024 4:44:00 PM
Ink Empress, what a mesmerizing mix of emotions woven with exquisite imagery. The delicate dance of words paints a vivid picture of love, yearning, and the ethereal beauty of winter. Each verse is a brushstroke on the canvas of emotions, creating a timeless ode to the complexities and enchantments of romance. Truly, your poetic prowess shines brightly in this captivating sonnet. Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 1/12/2024 6:55:00 AM
- Congratulations on your top poem of the 100 best new poems, Ink :) - An amazing poem ... well deserved :) - hugs
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Date: 1/5/2024 12:46:00 PM
Just come back to congratulation on your placement.. his has been a popular poems, hasnt it dear..
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Date: 1/4/2024 6:14:00 PM
Ink, this is so incredible, absolutely beautiful. I can well see why it is number one on the best new poems list, it is a brilliant and stunning gem.
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Date: 1/3/2024 4:26:00 AM
Dear Ink, Your innate ability as a poet and the lightness of your soul are such a blessed addition to this site. Another fav here. Happy New Year dear and congratulations for your recognition.
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Date: 12/30/2023 9:04:00 PM
Your poetry is like sweet vanilla ice cream peppered with jasmine and chickadees. Ironically, romance is best felt in the melancholic. If that is true, you give love a dulcet voice. Bravo.
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Date: 12/29/2023 2:32:00 PM
Congratulations top notch my girl, way to go !
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Date: 12/29/2023 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations sweet Ink on being top of the Woza! Hehe!! …..you are a sweet soul and a great poet ….a beautiful combination!! Enjoy my new friend! You deserve it…..Debx
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Date: 12/29/2023 7:50:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on being number 1 in the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup with your wonderful "Winter Sonata" write. Way To Go... Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................
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Date: 12/29/2023 4:31:00 AM
Dearest Ink you top the 100 list! So well deserved! Yay! Congrats
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Date: 12/27/2023 11:23:00 PM
Well done on the number 1 slot, Ink (*applause emoji*) :)
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Date: 12/27/2023 2:29:00 PM
Beautifully written!! Elegance of your words spill out to my soul
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Date: 12/26/2023 5:31:00 PM
For I would die a million deaths …. to rewind and replay. Soulful writing that takes the reader inward and captures the spirit and heart of your immortal romance . To journey with you is a gift dear Ink ! Congratulations on being number one on the best new poems list . Happy holidays . Hugs, Susan :)
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Date: 12/26/2023 12:42:00 AM
A stunning write my dear poet friend. I love and enjoyed this immensely. Wowser from start to end. Thanks for sharing your exceptional talent in poetry my dear poet friend Ink.Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 12/24/2023 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem as number one in the top 100 new poems.. You go girl..
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Sam Scott
Date: 12/27/2023 11:21:00 PM
Indeed :))
Date: 12/24/2023 11:32:00 AM
Love your imagery. I'm jealous that the sirens sing to you in dulcet lyrics. Keep yourself lash to the mast as Odysseus did and sing your song as sweetly as you can. I look forward to hearing you belt out your next tune. Keep your ears unplugged with beeswax. Well done.
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Date: 12/20/2023 5:50:00 AM
You look great, my friend, at the TOP of best poems list. BIG congrats, Ink.
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Ink Empress
Date: 12/20/2023 6:09:00 AM
Wow thats amazing thank you always dear Vijay for all your support
Date: 12/15/2023 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your fabulous win with this amazing poem, Dear Poetess. “For I would die a million deaths to rewind and replay…” How enchanting lines you have woven with brilliant metaphors and stunning word choices. I am falling in love with the winter sonata! Love and Hugs ~
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Date: 12/15/2023 2:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your third place with this awesome poem...
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Date: 12/14/2023 3:59:00 PM
I have no words, Ink! You have woven an unforgettable winter melody of the heart. Congratulations!
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Ink Empress
Date: 12/15/2023 7:29:00 AM
Ah thank you so very much. Im so grateful to be placed and to receive such soul warming feedback. Thank you for the inspiration truly
Date: 12/14/2023 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations. Exquisite creation to make me waltz...
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Ink Empress
Date: 12/15/2023 7:28:00 AM
Thank you so very much truly for your generous support. Truly grateful
Date: 12/14/2023 9:14:00 AM
Back with heartfelt congratulations on your podium win, dear Ink, sharing the podium with such a marvelous poetess is a great honor, thanks for your constant support and comments.
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Date: 12/3/2023 4:58:00 AM
No wonder this one's one of the top favs for me!! You really have an artistic talent of weaving enchanting tales everytime & that too so effortlessly my dear.. A love so true & pure, ahh, every soul aches to be embraced by such feelings of fondness.. "where arctic heartbeats linger", "thawing glacier hearts to stream upon silver lakes", "tendrils of winter jasmine, my fingers stretch beyond fogs of frozen rainbows" Such exquisite alliterations along with magnificent metaphors n I'm swooning over
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Date: 12/3/2023 5:00:00 AM
Your mellifluous touch to this elegant take for the contest! That particular reference of Orpheus and Eurydice made me go wowee, it's so intriguing.. "For I would die a million deaths to rewind and replay the dulcet chorus of this immortal romance" Ahh, this is honestly heartwarming my dear Fairy Goddess, you just always take your mystical wand and spellbind us with your heavenly charisma.. I loveee this! Best of luck!! :)
Date: 12/2/2023 6:05:00 PM
Your poetry is as beautiful as the heart that inspires the luminescent words of this poem. You allow the reader to feel all the emotions and passion that drive the message of your poem. It is exhilarating to read and feel the alliterations and the eloquent imagery you share with us. A FAV for my list, my friend. " For I would die a million deaths to rewind and replay the dulcet chorus of this immortal romance." I've felt this feeling, it is ecstasy. Love and Light for you tonight, Bill
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