Winter Sonata

Summer's hunter-green fields yielded to autumnal beige
and vermillion,
soon came the frosted air and cardinals singing in
snowy pine boughs.
Deer shyly emerged from woodlands edge for feed
families left out,
winter sonata of our melody of long ago.
Your chestnut beard sparkled with ice crystals,
your large sienna-brown eyes of merriment.

Nearby home's smoking chimneys heavily encased
with snow and ice,
we'd playfully toss snowballs,
when our youth we thought of as lasting.
Crackling colored firelogs,
hot cocoa and pajamas,
cuddling neath a red plaid wool blanket.

Oh, the laughter,
the kisses of Christmas love,
watching the Jimmy Stewart-Donna Reed
movie, "It's A Wonderful Life,"
in its classical timelessness,
pearlescent doves and angel hair round
the tree.

Several snowbound days together,
we got to know each other in cherishing
of time as a newly bonded couple,
and welcomed our baby daughter the
following November.
Sweetly now, 
as December is days away,
wishing you could walk over the 
threshold again,
scent of Grey Flannel,
singing in baritone.

I can smell the burning hickory wood
and see our three stockings hung on the
hearth,
as wintry songs in the wind,
fill my hours of remembrance,
winter sonata of our melody of long ago. ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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December 15, 2023 at 2:27 PM
I knew this one would do well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
Elliott Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 6:26 AM
Thank you, dear Silent One. All the best to you. ~
Brul Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 4:11 PM
This is so magical! The last stanza is so heart-warming! Congratulations Regina.
Elliott Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 6:28 AM
Thank you so much for my contest placement, Job. It is so very appreciated. Blessings of the season to you and yours. Hugs xx
Andresen Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 3:10 AM
- A beautiful image you created with this wonderful poem ... I can see everything clearly, Regina :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Elliott Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 8:11 AM
Thank you kindly, Anne-Lise, so sweet of you to come by with supportive comments. All the best to you. ~
John Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 2:31 AM
Thoughts bonded together to beautifully here, Regina. Thank you for opportunity to read it.
Elliott Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 3:49 PM
Thank you so much, Andrew. I really appreciate your kind comment. All the best
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November 26, 2023 at 9:34 AM
I never knew what Timothy meant - thank you! This poem here is beautiful - thank you for them and being part of my holiday!
Elliott Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 1:45 PM
My deepest thank you, Susan. You are such a lovely poetry friend. Sunday evening blessings to you. ~
Kerr Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 5:57 PM
Regina, I’m deeply flattered and indeed honoured by your constructive comments on my pieces. Winter sonata is a whirling winter wonderland of divine inspiration. Your vocabulary glows, gleams and glitters. It is quite the magical and majestic creation. Best of luck with this Kind regards Howard
Elliott Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 5:04 AM
My deepest thank you, Howard. You are such an encouraging poetry friend. ~
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