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Winter Magic

Squirrels dancing in the trees when snowflakes come to call There's enchantment in the forest as snowflakes start to fall There's magic in their silence When these flakes of snow come down Adorning all the evergreens, Giving peaks a snowy crown Alluring in their design Each flake, a work of art Its part of winter's magic with beauty to impart

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Terry Miller

Date: 1/23/2024 7:24:00 AM

Magical poem and great rhymes, congratulations

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/15/2024 7:18:00 AM

Joseph, a charming winter poem, congratulations on your winning placement!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/14/2024 1:10:00 PM

- Both magical and beautiful ... good luck in the contest, Joseph :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/14/2024 5:49:00 AM

I have read your work and enjoyed reading it. Keep on writing, using your creative muse. I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow of this one. Sara K

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/14/2024 5:45:00 AM

There's magic in their silence When these flakes of snow come down Adorning all the evergreens, Giving peaks a snowy crown--lovely winter images Joseph--splendidly brought to fore.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/13/2024 4:35:00 PM

a lovely and effective rhyme scheme. Your imagery created such a delightful visual...(squirrels dancing in the trees) and (each flake a work of art). I think to think of snowflakes as tiny miracles because of their uniqueness. Rambling. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/13/2024 11:09:00 AM

The beauty of snow and the unique design of each snowflake, certainly brings a smile. :) Yes, it's that time of year, my dear friend. Your thoughts curl around the magic of winter. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/13/2024 10:54:00 AM

Such a wonderful poem Joseph full of wintry delight and it flows so well especially when read out loud. I love the imagery with squirrels, snowflakes, evergreens and the line,’ Giving peaks a snowy crown’. Such a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Blessings to you. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/13/2024 8:29:00 AM

I sense the enchantment of the season resonating within your words, my friend. Your mastery of rhyme and seamless flow is truly nice, Joseph.

Constance La France

Date: 1/13/2024 6:29:00 AM

Joseph, magical poem, well done, blessings, Constance

Silent One

Date: 1/13/2024 5:34:00 AM

I can feel the magic of the season in your words my friend.. nice rhymes and flow here.. best of luck in the contest..