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Winter Has Stolen the Night

Winter has stolen the night,  
          A world I have always known, 
          is lost in a blanket of snow, .... 
                       with recognition adrift, and thrown
                             tossed away in the endless white

I gaze over landscapes, whitewashed in the moonlight
       Strange bittersweet etchings of silver starlight

Trees reaching high, with wild naked limbs, 
    Each branch empty handed, their twigs opened wide
          grasping for snow flakes...or something to find
            Something familiar,  that's been left behind

Drifts growing higher, while icicles glimmer
         distorting the mirrors of stars from the night

I know that the moon is hiding, somewhere, 
               caught in the winter's snow of sleep
                    Bemused are the clouds while obscuring the light, 
                          disguising the image we once knew at sight

My world flickers dim, bleaching the ground, 
   Taking my breath, until all words are gone

I cannot recall, I cannot rewind,  all the old music that I've known so well
     
             I strain to hear where summer dwelled, too thin to be recalled
                      Where all the autumn leaves once fell
                          Where seasons green wore flowered hills

They must disappear, with each thing we have known, 
           Bleached by the moon,  until they are pale
                Stars then will spin, and seasons will dim
         
                     But, then all the reasons for believing begins ....


Winter has stolen the night, tonight, and the world I've always known
                is 
                   l
                    o
                      s
                        t
                          .... in the sparkling snow, adrift in the timeless wind.
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Written for contest: A Winter Poem
Judged 12/4/16
Resubmitted for Contest: 2/6/17
Form G or N/A
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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La France Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 7:29 PM
Carrie congratulations on first place in my contest with this beautiful poem ~
Martin Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 11:55 AM
Great poem and especially appreciated now (it's snowing here). Congratulations Carrie! :-)
White Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 3:29 AM
wow, i love this poem, very glad you were placed this time :) Congratulations!
Smith Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 6:36 AM
Great work Carrie, congratulations...
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 1:21 PM
Just beautiful, Carrie! Congrats on top win! 7
Raina Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations on your win....beautiful write!
Daniel Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 2:50 AM
This is breathtaking, Carrie:) congratulations on your well deserved win:) a 7:)
Yvonne Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Brilliant...just...brilliant! Love your poetry what great talent you have been blessed with. Your poems oft leave me breathless. A Fav!
Mark Avatar
January 11, 2017 at 7:50 AM
Great write Carrie, you been gone too long...x Ian
Nair Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Hi Carrie, What a contrast in styles between yours and one of Ruben's that i happened to read just before this. I like the simplicity of this one as much as i like Ruben's depth.
Lawless Avatar
December 3, 2016 at 9:25 AM
Carrie, this one swirled around me like the first snow...especially like the lines "It flickers dim, bleaching the night" and "a summer dims, too thin to be recalled". Just a beautifully written picture of a snowy night.
Godwin Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 11:00 PM
Beautiful imagery so richly delivered by your free verse which is a joy to read - always ... CayCay
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