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winter fall into the mood

A hot apple pie— sample Taste of trees; where aromas More pungent and crisp never Their Granny Smith smells.

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Silent One

Date: 11/15/2023 3:46:00 PM

Nice one.. you did this from very well too..

Christina Bowring

Date: 11/15/2023 3:07:00 PM

A great Dodoitsu Paige - haven’t tried the form myself yet. Love the title and you can smell the apples with your description. I like the sharpness of Granny Smiths! Quite hungry now. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :):)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/15/2023 2:09:00 PM

well-penned Dodoitsu, Paige. I don't like raw Granny Smith apples but I do like them in apple pie. I prefer Gala or Honey Crisp apples. I like Cosmic apples as well but they're more expensive, but I treat myself sometimes. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2023 1:41:00 PM

SWEET. My hubbie loves apple pie.

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/15/2023 5:51:00 AM

Nicely penned dodoitsu, Paige. These are too sweet for me, but I really like them.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/15/2023 3:47:00 AM

this makes me crave apple pie! lol nice little dodoitsu, love 'taste of trees' :)

Ink Empress

Date: 11/14/2023 11:45:00 PM

Ah how beautiful i can smell that through your words, so creatively described here, I especially love “ taste of trees” thats new and deep. “ crisp never” awwn! Love always reading your poems they speak to my soul, sending you light alwaysss

Bill Baker

Date: 11/14/2023 8:19:00 PM

Put those apples into a pie, bake it, slice it, have a piece with ice cream on top. I'm ready! I like this poem just before Thanksgiving, gw. A poet friend in Texas, Bill