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For the F Form - Free Verse (Written My Way) Poetry Contest of Constance La France

Cardinal Perched on Snowy Branch in ...

Winter system heads toward Arkansas ...

"The breath of winter holds a hushed enchantment, a captivating stillness." Anna Islington One frigid February day after a night’s snowfall had left my world white and pristine, I took my new sled and slowly trudged over our huge back yard to a spot which led to the top of a hill. Down this hill we children loved to go sledding. In white’s silence, I felt utterly at peace and unhurried. A few kids had arrived at the top of the hill and had already left before I got there. I could see the tracks of their boots and was glad to see that their sleds had made somewhat of a pathway for me to go sledding down. A few lyrics from “Winter Wonderland” drifted to my mind, for the snow around me glistened beneath winter’s wan sun, but I was alone in the wonderland. And no sleigh bells were ringing. Suddenly I spied a bright cardinal bird perched on the powdery branch of an evergreen tree. Its small red-crested head seemed to nod at me. I was blessed by that special moment as I stood transfixed watching it. I looked down the sledding path to the thickness of the woods below. In summer it is a chaos of untended tangled weeds and clusters of many trees. On this day – frosted by nature - the woods appeared the opposite of chaos. Concealed by snow, the woods was a picture of beauty in the cold, breathless air. Cold, yes, it was so cold. My mitten-fingers would soon grow numb. I got hurriedly onto my sled. Then gliding smootly downward, I went deeper and deeper into winter enchantment.

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Date: 8/7/2024 1:14:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest, I enjoyed your poem a lot, well done, liked the quote and images too, Constance
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Date: 8/7/2024 11:34:00 AM
Oh one of my favorite things to do as a child and best memories. You've captured the enchantment of winter and nature in this nostalgic poem! Winter truly is a wonderland like no other! I wrote a short story about this same thing and posted it under short stores on here. It must not be a popular thing on ps... no one has read it yet lol! Thinking about reposting as a poem... anyway ,congrats on placement! Xxoo
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/7/2024 4:29:00 PM
People rarely read our stories. I think mine are unread also. Maybe I posted them as narratives. Too long ago to remember. Thanks for your comment. I am not s fan of winter but I have good nostalgic childhood memories of it
Date: 7/30/2024 12:55:00 AM
I hail winter. This summer is killing me. Hope you are well, haven't seen you around. Great poem with magnificent flow, Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 7/29/2024 5:15:00 PM
Beautiful- Winter really speaks to me, too. I enjoyed reading your memories.
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Date: 7/29/2024 6:21:00 AM
I like the cardinal part especially. A digression from your theme, but not really since it became part of the overall enchantment of this particular snowy, fun day. Ahhh to be a kid again
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Date: 7/28/2024 1:49:00 PM
I think Constance will like this one.. she always likes your poem.. nicely done with great imagery..
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Date: 7/28/2024 1:34:00 PM
Wonderful write, dear poet! I love the tack of the boots from the previous kids and the Winter enchantment that would later be untended weeds. My breath catches as I think of a lovely slide down childhood’s Winter hill. Hugs and blessings ~ Kim
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/7/2024 4:29:00 PM
Thanks, Kim
Date: 7/28/2024 12:55:00 PM
your offering is stunning it makes winter look elegant and inviting ,andie...very experiential: win it!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/7/2024 4:29:00 PM
Thanks, deat
Date: 7/28/2024 12:48:00 PM
So descriptive and beautiful! I felt like my fingers did freeze as i read this, so picturesque and well written free verse and i love it when you arrange lines like this sweet andrea! Pleasure reading your work! Sending you light! Best wishes always
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/7/2024 4:30:00 PM
Thanks, sweetie

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