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Winter Blues

Silent snowflakes drizzle yet mourn, feeling the anguish of another morn- Never on earth have I been so forlorn, I must learn to let go, free my transgressions, live a life of redemption not regression. Winter arrives, and I am saddened by fate, constant blame and tormented hate- Can I come to my senses or is it too late? I fear not the wicked just my own sins, in the game of life, my soul never wins. Icicles dangle, a rainbow kaleidoscope, lost all my passion, faith and hope- I can no longer find the ability to cope, leaving dust in the wind devoid of mist, angels in the snow no longer exist. Frigid temperatures, I’m a frozen snowman, just trying to do the best that I can- My knees stuck bent I can no longer stand, roughly seeking joy in the far-off distance, leading a live of misery and constant resistance. December 27, 2017

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Date: 12/27/2017 2:36:00 PM
Luloo, this is the way I feel right now; I'm looking forward to spring and warmer weather when we are all thinking about the rebirth of life. John
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/28/2017 9:41:00 AM
so true, it's so dreary out there here in Michigan..thank you dear John :)-luloo
Date: 12/27/2017 11:52:00 AM
You've painted a dark picture. Hope it's just seasonal let-down for you. Always expertly written.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/28/2017 9:40:00 AM
I'm good, no worries, just a fleeting moment of despair..thank you! :)-luloo

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