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Winter Birds - Lei

A blue jay cries high in the tree on a branch, vibrant blues we see A cardinal pair perched for seed as the bright red male takes the lead A chickadee lands as he sings a dee, dee, dee and flaps his wings A grey nuthatch lands upside down and feeds never turning around 12/28/19 Contest: Lay it on me - 8x8 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Eric Cohen

Date: 2/22/2020 9:44:00 PM

Hello, just noticed this and did a double take as this is a perfect description of my feeder area today. Your bird and nature poems are real, and really well written. I've been enjoying them. In April every year a hummingbird will come to my yard and, looking confused, look for the nectar feeder until I put it up. That's my cue. Best to you.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/23/2020 5:09:00 AM

Thank you Eric, I have a passion for bird watching and enjoy seeing them at my feeders. Thanks for your visit!

Eve Roper

Date: 1/16/2020 10:40:00 PM

Beautiful verse,Tania , congratulations your win. Eve

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/17/2020 4:38:00 AM

Thank you Eve!

Charles Messina

Date: 1/16/2020 8:25:00 AM

I love birds..to eat (chicken, turkey, duck) (lol) All kidding aside I do love birds...I have a thing for cardinals :) Beautifully written and very well done, Tania. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/16/2020 3:17:00 PM

Thank you Charlie for your nice comments and my placement in your contest!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/14/2020 2:36:00 AM

Very nicely done, my friend - I am a bird person, so this went straight to the heart. Blessings! :o)

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/14/2020 5:40:00 PM

Thank you Greg for your comments and visit! :)

Ann Gilmour

Date: 12/28/2019 12:14:00 PM

This is delightful Tania and to watch birds going about their daily business is such a treat. Good luck in the contest with this sweet Lay. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/28/2019 12:38:00 PM

Thank you Ann, I love to watch birds as you can see! :) Thanks for your visit!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 12/28/2019 9:34:00 AM

A darling poem, thoroughly enjoyed; best for a win! xomo

Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/28/2019 11:11:00 AM

Thank you Mo! hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/28/2019 7:55:00 AM

I am not familiar with this form but I like your result. Good luck in the contest. Happy New year Rick.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/28/2019 11:11:00 AM

Thank you Rick! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/28/2019 7:23:00 AM

absolutely charming Tania:-) good luck in the contest, I must have a peek and see if I can write this form of poems I don't think its one I've done before:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/28/2019 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Jan, I wrote about one of my loves! hugs