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Winter Again

I came across your unfinshed poem I wondered where you were I sit in silence A dusty room A lonely candle burns You always filled my soul with love Your fragile dreams unfold In murmurous whims This fairy tale For now lies untold So long ago A perfect love In beauty Played our song And now the winding river dies For Winter's breath Consume

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/27/2018 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful.
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Date: 7/27/2018 6:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win . I enjoyed reading this heartfelt well written poem with great imagery. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/25/2018 9:00:00 AM
Lovely, congrats.
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Date: 7/25/2018 5:35:00 AM
Abandoned and alone feeling the piercing cold of winter years. Beautiful Rick! Congratulations on your top win! : )
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Date: 7/20/2018 1:50:00 PM
Such a tender, heartfelt poem of loss and regret, the last lines really moved me-
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