Winter

WINTER time passes by, day’s had come the cold breeze you’ve shared, mother earth, gives joy to my life. when the air landed on my skin, it feels no pain. the sake of hard work pays off. i embraces my future and dreams, to pursue my life and the worth of my family. loneliness pushes me to do this dedication urgh.. cold breeze, it eases the pain. moments enjoyed when i think GOD guided me, to do this away from home.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2016 10:12:00 PM

Nice to see this one again, Mark. LINDA =

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/29/2016 9:09:00 AM

- A great poem, Mark - Welcome to Poetry soup - Hope you will find much pleasure to be here with us :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/28/2016 6:06:00 AM

Mark,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 2/28/2016 5:01:00 AM

I read some of your poems=Wonderful. ABC: A from adorable, B from beautiful, C from challenging and charming etc.Congrat.