Winter

Winter's warmth of white glistening promise and windswept dreams Plays her glorious song through the forest of echoing tree's Tumbling in her beauty upon each facet of light profound She shimmers in an orchestrated display of heavenly sounds In her passive seduction draped in her silver diamond gown She calls to the setting sun and gently lies down...

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Jean Murray

Date: 1/17/2017 4:52:00 PM

A winner twice over. No wonder Rick. Congratulations.

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/17/2017 12:44:00 PM

Beautiful work my friend, congratulations...

Carolyn Fish

Date: 1/17/2017 6:55:00 AM

My goodness, stunning write! Absolutely love it. The personification is spot on!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 1/16/2017 5:35:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Rick. Beautiful imagery. Agnes

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/16/2017 4:59:00 PM

The scene you paint of winter with your expressive imagery is delightful. Congratulations on your 263 contest win.

Vandana Sharma

Date: 2/4/2015 12:04:00 AM

again an awesome piece of poetry:)!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2015 9:22:00 PM

Rick, congratulations on your Awesome Season win. ~LINDA~

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/6/2015 5:14:00 PM

Dear Rick, I am so happy Shadow gave you a #1 for this beautiful entry. Congratulations! It deserves to be at the top!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/5/2015 11:21:00 PM

Awesome write Rick! Congrats on super win! Wish u a very happy new year 2015!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2015 11:12:00 PM

Fantastic, Rick!!! A well deserved win!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/5/2015 7:51:00 PM

excellent personification. Congrad’s on your win. Light & Love

John Lawless

Date: 1/5/2015 5:36:00 PM

Rick, I love the contradiction of the first two words of the poem "Winter's warmth" they soften the whole idea of winter and allow for the beauty described to settle gently on the reader. congrats..