Winter

I hear each step as I cross the midwinter night alone A heart races as I see a small light on the horizon Drawing you closer,as quiet snow begins to fall in darkness 6/15/14

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/31/2018 12:34:00 PM

Beautiful Frederic! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/30/2018 11:56:00 PM

Lovely, Frederic. A beauty. Congrats on your win.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/30/2018 10:10:00 PM

I'm unfamiliar with this form but wow, is this good. Congratulations on your win :) xomo!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/30/2018 8:03:00 PM

Soo good! Reminds me of Frost’s “Stopping By Windows On A Snowy Evening”

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/29/2014 4:15:00 PM

a sijo that stands out in imagery, frederick.. cheers to you on your fine win.. hugggs

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/29/2014 11:32:00 AM

Hi Frederic, just a postscript to my congratulations below - I had predicted earlier that this would be a sure winner! Yeah!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/29/2014 11:29:00 AM

Hi Frederic, this is such a beautifully descriptive write about winter! Huge congratulations to you on your well-deserved win! Warmest regards.

Frederic Parker
Date: 6/29/2014 11:45:00 AM

thank you Pandita for your kindness

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/29/2014 10:11:00 AM

congrats on a great win, Frederic.. Hugs.. Arlene

Frederic Parker
Date: 6/29/2014 11:46:00 AM

thank you Arlene for your kindness

Elaine George

Date: 6/29/2014 6:27:00 AM

Beautiful!!! many congrats on your win Frederic. Elaine

Frederic Parker
Date: 6/29/2014 11:47:00 AM

thank you Elaine for your kindness

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2014 11:11:00 PM

You painted a romantic picture of meeting someone in the snowy darkness. Thanks for submitting to my contest, Frederic. Nicely done and Congratulations.

Frederic Parker
Date: 6/29/2014 11:49:00 AM

yes and not one snowball fight, though I wanted to, then snow angels..

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/15/2014 4:04:00 PM

Hi Frederic, this is very beautiful and romantic - a winner for sure!