Winter

Hot coffee in hand looking out the cold window I see winter has arrived. A white snow blanket covers nature this winter all sleep until spring awakes. Date Written:1/9/2023 2 Place

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Len Gasun

Date: 2/5/2023 5:27:00 AM

Brilliant sedoka my dear friend Paula. I love the panoramic scenery of winter in your poem. Congratulations on your win and this excellent write! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/5/2023 7:44:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you again. Your very kind words made my day. (Thanks) Hugs...... Have a blessed day......................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2023 6:24:00 AM

I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/27/2023 8:51:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you could drop by. Good to see you. Have a blessed day......................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2023 1:23:00 PM

Back with my congrats. Way to go, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/27/2023 8:49:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad to see you back. That means a lot to me. Have a blessed day......................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/25/2023 10:07:00 AM

you have the right idea Paula, :) hibernate until spring, me too , congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/25/2023 11:15:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It would be neat to hibernate for the winter like the animals do. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day......................

Charles Messina

Date: 1/25/2023 5:18:00 AM

Lovely poem and imagery, Paula. Congratulations on your placement in my contest, Thanks for entering...stay warm...hugs Charlie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/25/2023 11:10:00 AM

Thanks for your note, kind words and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win in your "Winter Sedoka Poetry Contest." Thank You for having this contest and placement. Glad you like my "Winter" write. It was fun to write. Have a blessed day......................

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/12/2023 4:19:00 PM

A lovely word-painting of this winter scene. Good visual on this.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2023 6:54:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my Winter write. I enjoyed writing it. Now to get warm. Have a blessed day......................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/11/2023 7:22:00 AM

Simple and wonderful, Paula:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2023 11:23:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this winter write. Have a blessed day......................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/10/2023 11:14:00 AM

Great Sedoku, Paula Panagiota Best wishes

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2023 11:22:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like my Sedoka winter write. Have a blessed day......................

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/10/2023 10:56:00 AM

A lovely view you have from your window... I know such wonderful winter landscapes being from Wisconsin... Keep up the great writing, Paula! My best wishes for the contest!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2023 11:21:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like my snowy cold write. Stay warm. Have a blessed day......................

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/9/2023 5:34:00 PM

Paula, how cozy! Love the imagery. Happy Winter! Good Luck in the Contest! Paulette

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2023 11:19:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you love the imagery here. Winter a cozy time of the year. Stay warm. Have a blessed day......................

Michael Tor

Date: 1/9/2023 2:42:00 PM

This comforting piece Paula Is one that I can relate to living here in upstate NY bordering Canada...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2023 11:17:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this snow write. WOW!!! You are in cold country. Stay warm with some hot coffee/tea. Have a blessed day......................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/9/2023 10:38:00 AM

I enjoyed this peaceful, cozy winter scene, Paula. Good luck in the contest. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/9/2023 12:42:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed my fun snow write. Snow can be so peaceful/cozy. Stay warm. Have a blessed day......................

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/9/2023 10:04:00 AM

Hibernating with a hot coffee whilst the snow outside settles, what a wonderful picture you paint Paula, a great entry for the contest, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/9/2023 12:39:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my write/painting. Yes, hot coffee/tea or coco and snow just go together. Maybe a warm cookie or two on the side. Stay warm. Have a blessed day......................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/9/2023 9:08:00 AM

Hot coffee hand and a snow blanket :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/9/2023 9:11:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my write. Hot coffee and snow just go together. Stay warm. Have a blessed day......................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2023 8:56:00 AM

Very nicely done, Paula. this is a contest I have yet to check out. Can hardly keep up with my life let alone Soup!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/9/2023 8:59:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. I know how busy life can get. I need 2 or 3 more days to a week, then I would be OK. Have a blessed day......................