Winter

So, what does Nature
and Her Winter suggest?

that death is but a sleep
before a refreshing showery
sunny new awakening

that each resting kernel of being
is a blossom again to come forth
perennials of form with lofting 
scents and beguiling evolving 
textures

no soil can ever fully contain
nor rising smoke of briers
be anything less than Freedom 
Breaths released

seeking dawns of experience
souls en-route to still ampler bliss
having been de-shelled 
freed from stifling encumbering filters

I think Winter as much the good messenger
as it is the Grim Reaper

I think Winter as much the cold and still
as it is the ceaseless heart of birthing
warmth

flakes of color never straying too far
from their green leafy patterns 

we travel inherent veins sensing our
own blood pulsing there-in and out
blushing and unfolding fond ripeness

every flower brought forth
a new universe
to freshly sniff and dream

every bee and speck of pollen
an extender-finger pointing toward
an even greater God

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Date: 2/10/2023 10:26:00 PM
After the cold dreary winter, there is a spring, a season of rebirth ! Old age is akin to winter. After coming to the end of earthly life, our soul enters an eternal life. As you have rightly expressed- "souls en-route to still ampler bliss having been de-shelled freed from stifling encumbering filters". In a way winter is to be seen as a precursor to spring... the season of life when we are freed from all encumbrances and fetters ! Beautiful poem dear Joe...and wonderful imagery !
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/11/2023 6:09:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa; I see you get it also. Once again your comment has brightened my day. Blessings my friend!
Date: 11/25/2022 6:02:00 AM
You build up a poem so that it aspires to greatness.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/25/2022 6:32:00 AM
Thank you, Victor; blessings my friend. You made my day.
Date: 11/25/2022 3:50:00 AM
wow this is awesome to read and even better to take in, love your style Joe, I have sent you a soup mail, please read
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/25/2022 6:34:00 AM
Thank you, Rose; your encouragement means a lot. I will keep doing my best. Blessings!
Date: 11/24/2022 9:20:00 PM
You portray winter in such shades of light and darkness Joe, all pointing to the wonders gifted to us by our Divine Creator. A very special poem, significant in its message and written for untold feeling to permeate. Thank you, I enjoyed this very much.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/25/2022 6:38:00 AM
Thank you, Wendy; your own writing I find marvelous. We are so blessed to have a place like Soup, for sharing and new inspiration. Blessings!
Date: 11/24/2022 4:00:00 PM
This is so beautiful, Joe. A different look at winter~I think winter as much the cold and still as it is the ceaseless heart of birthing warmth~ so lovely.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/24/2022 7:46:00 PM
Oh, thank you so much, Ann; I was trying for a slightly different twist or perspective. So pleased that you enjoyed this one. Blessings!
Date: 11/24/2022 10:55:00 AM
A stunner in the poetic skies, Prince. Pangie
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/24/2022 7:48:00 PM
Thank you, Pangie; I wasn't certain of this one, hoping I was not lost in ethers. Blessings. Hope Elena is feeling better.
Date: 11/24/2022 10:07:00 AM
that last stanza really nails it, Joe!!!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/24/2022 7:50:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea; I try to write something different, but always mention God in most my works, even if briefly. I am hopeless. Blessings!
Date: 11/24/2022 9:31:00 AM
Wow Joe, a plethora of descriptive visions. What a wonderful poem.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/24/2022 9:38:00 AM
Hi Wendy; thank you. Have a beautiful day. Blessings!
Date: 11/24/2022 8:24:00 AM
There is always a silver lining.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/24/2022 8:39:00 AM
Hi Victor; absolutely! For me, spirit has more substance and meaning than all our other senses combined. Blessings my friend.
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