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Winter - Collab With Valsa George

Hi Winter, how we feel your icy touch! The earth remains under your freezing clutch. All trees stand sleeping in the biting cold. And the sun has lost its bright sheen of gold. From nowhere comes the song of any bird. On slopes, one cannot sight the grazing herd. Piles of snow lie heaped on the barren ground. The whole Earth lies in a sea of ice drowned! Snow swirls down in flurries of soft whispers. The winter wind wails, whistles and whimpers. All creatures for warmer climes are yearning. In our houses, fires are warmly burning. Skiing and sledding and building snowmen, Winter's time to become children again. Thank you for reminding us with hue white, Sometimes we too need, from work, a respite. 28th March 2023

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Date: 3/30/2023 6:34:00 PM
Winter is one of my favorite seasons, and it is always sad to see it go, but I am ready for a little springtime... Your poem really brings that chilly season back to life for the reader with it's rich imagery... A wonderful collaboration from the both of you!
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Date: 3/30/2023 1:34:00 PM
Ahhh!! Yes, sometimes we do need a respite. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing your gift with us and for your kind review of my work. Sara
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Date: 3/30/2023 7:03:00 AM
Enjoyed working with you Joanna ! Thank you for giving me an opportunity to collaborate with you . With your contribution, the poem has become a full fledged winter poem highlighting the season's tenets.
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