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Winner By a Nose

I was stuck in traffic on the corner of Main and Fourth Yelling in a loud voice until I became quite hoarse. Finally, the lanes of motorists started moving forth. I was headed for the racetrack to bet on a horse. My taxi driver said, "Sometimes life just ain't fair." I answered in agreement and then replied, "Oh, for sure. You got that right. How much is my fare?" He said, "Ten bucks, Mister. That's what you owe." I arrived a bit too late to make a bet on race one, but in plenty time to read the program for race two. I wanted to bet a horse here, who'd previously won, hoping she'd be a winner for me in this race, too. The sleek filly's name was My Sweet Southern Belle. In the post parade I noticed that she had a lively gait, but I was getting impatient to hear the starting bell, and then I heard it ring and they surged from the gate. I knew Belle had been assigned the heaviest weight, but she had impressive breeding, and she wouldn't fold. Her jockey held her back, for it was the plan to wait. I knew Belle was special since the day she was foaled. The favorite took the lead, a determined little dun, who looked strong enough to run all day for a week, but Belle was closing in, and I knew she wasn't done. The other horses' stamina seemed to be getting weak. To the lead went a big gray mare, called Lady's Knight. I hoped Belle could catch that one, but who knows? Belle soared down the stretch like a comet in the night, crossed over the finish line first and won by just a nose! October 10, 2022 Homophone Rhyme Contest Being sponsored by Hat Bueckert

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Date: 11/19/2022 1:42:00 PM
Jenna, fun story hope your horse win helped to ease your hoarse voice! If people didn't know about homophones before they could easily learn from your clever poem!! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/14/2022 10:29:00 AM
Jenna, such a cute story - I enjoyed it immensely. So many clever homophone pairs related to your tale of getting to the racetrack then wagering on the winning horse (I particularly liked fold/foaled). Though homophones make it harder to learn our language, they do add a measure of charm and poetic opportunities. It was nice to see you place so highly in the contest ~ John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/15/2022 12:45:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your detailed review, John. It was such a fun challenge and I appreciate your many comments of encouragement.
Date: 11/14/2022 12:56:00 AM
Amazingly done! Congratulations.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/15/2022 12:44:00 PM
Thanks very much, Terry.
Date: 11/13/2022 2:04:00 PM
Great poem Jenna, I love a good story, very clever and fun!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/15/2022 12:43:00 PM
Thanks for liking it well enough for a placement in your contest, Hat.
Date: 10/21/2022 2:21:00 AM
This is more than a mere poem, it is an entire chapter! And it was great from beginning to end!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/15/2022 12:43:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Caren.
Date: 10/10/2022 4:47:00 PM
Love this winning entry of the Horse finishing first Jenna. You had me riding on the horse with your descriptive words enjoyed the race even if I was not there. Thank you for posting and best wishes in winning the contest...
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2022 10:23:00 AM
Thank you for liking my racetrack storyline, Michael. I hope it will be well received.
Date: 10/10/2022 12:13:00 PM
A homophones masterpiece Jenna, your poetic talent is on show, best of look, I mean luck lol. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2022 10:21:00 AM
You are so encouraging with your comments, Tom. Thanks so much!
Date: 10/10/2022 9:36:00 AM
These type of poems are a killer to write Jenna, and you went for it unflinchingly using determination and grit, to get over the line by a nose, you can’t have much left in the tank after this epic write, all the best for contest, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 10:19:00 AM
I began by writing down lots of homophone examples then tried to close in on some kind of theme in which I could entwine them. The horse venue won by a nose. LOL Thanks ever so much for liking my homophonic day at the races, David.
Date: 10/10/2022 8:50:00 AM
Jenna, this is masterful! I couldn't come up with those marvelous homophones in a million years, and you weaved them through the story splendidly. This should be a winner!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 10:17:00 AM
Your compliments are always awesome, and I know you mean them in all sincerity. So, thank you, Milt.
Date: 10/10/2022 6:58:00 AM
I Love this creative race Jenna :) Perfect for the contest! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 7:16:00 AM
Thanks, Linda. I enjoyed creating this one and using my love for the sport.

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