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Wink

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Tranquility

Eye Appears As tree bends Over water Nature winks through portal of scenic bliss As sun dips lower, shadows form o’er stream Misty farewell To a day Of peace Calm
, Written September 29, 2020 For Eve Roper’s Double Tetractys Contest Image three chosen howmanysyllables.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/13/2020 12:09:00 PM
I can see why this was a winner with such a great choice of words...
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Date: 10/10/2020 3:47:00 PM
Creative winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 10/9/2020 8:05:00 PM
I love the illusion of 'winking' you have described, a scenic portal well penned, congratulations!
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Date: 10/6/2020 7:46:00 AM
So beautiful Carolyn, Congratulation on a truly delightful write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/3/2020 5:57:00 PM
this is so gorgeous. Congratulations, dear.
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Date: 10/2/2020 8:31:00 PM
Wow! Congrats. This is so delightful to the soul, especially this line: "Nature winks through portal of scenic bliss." Likewise, thanks for my placement in your recently-judged contest, with your uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Date: 10/2/2020 6:00:00 PM
It’s a delight to return and extend my congratulations to you, Carolyn, for your excellent win with your exceptional poem. Warmest wishes always, dear poetess and friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/2/2020 5:42:00 PM
Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Carolyn. I like the theme in your, " Wink of Tranquility “, very inspirational. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"
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Date: 10/2/2020 12:13:00 PM
Carolyn, I love the concept of the wink! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/2/2020 9:46:00 AM
Nice interpretation. Congrats to win on your wonderful composition. Blessing
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Date: 10/2/2020 8:05:00 AM
- I love your painting :) - "Nature winks through the portal of scenic bliss" ... beautifully written, Carolyn :) - Congratulations on your third place in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2020 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement. You are not forgotten. ~~
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Date: 10/2/2020 7:08:00 AM
Your lines paint a very tranquil scene. Congratulation on your winning write, Carolyn.
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Date: 10/2/2020 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/1/2020 2:51:00 PM
The eyes have it! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn. Peace and Serenity, Gershon
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Date: 9/30/2020 8:42:00 AM
Dear Carolyn, the beauty of your imagery takes my breath away! Nature's tranquil emotions flow through your graceful poem with ease. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/30/2020 12:53:00 AM
Love the imagery Carolyn and your interpretation of the image. Good luck Tom
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Date: 9/29/2020 12:15:00 PM
Great imagery Carolyn--enjoyed the voice of your poem...Nature winks through portal of scenic bliss..all the best my friend.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/29/2020 12:32:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Vijay!
Date: 9/29/2020 11:54:00 AM
No image appears, but Western wildfires could certainly do with a day misty day of peace and calm. Aloha! Rico
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/29/2020 11:58:00 AM
Thanks for reading, Rico. Hope you are well.