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Wink

of

Tranquility

Wink of Tranquility

Eye
Appears
As tree bends
Over water
Nature winks through portal of scenic bliss

As sun dips lower, shadows form o’er stream
Misty farewell
To a day
Of peace
Calm,



Written September 29, 2020
For Eve Roper’s Double Tetractys Contest
Image three chosen
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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/21/2020 8:23:00 AM

Eve is sure to enjoy this write, but I see you won - congratulation my friend, you deserve all and any accolades you receive. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Silent One

Date: 10/13/2020 12:09:00 PM

I can see why this was a winner with such a great choice of words...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2020 3:47:00 PM

Creative winner. Way to go. Sara

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/9/2020 8:05:00 PM

I love the illusion of 'winking' you have described, a scenic portal well penned, congratulations!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/6/2020 7:46:00 AM

So beautiful Carolyn, Congratulation on a truly delightful write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2020 5:57:00 PM

this is so gorgeous. Congratulations, dear.

Beata Agustin

Date: 10/2/2020 8:31:00 PM

Wow! Congrats. This is so delightful to the soul, especially this line: "Nature winks through portal of scenic bliss." Likewise, thanks for my placement in your recently-judged contest, with your uplifting comments. God bless you.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/2/2020 6:00:00 PM

It’s a delight to return and extend my congratulations to you, Carolyn, for your excellent win with your exceptional poem. Warmest wishes always, dear poetess and friend.. ~Susan

Eve Roper

Date: 10/2/2020 5:42:00 PM

Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Carolyn. I like the theme in your, " Wink of Tranquility “, very inspirational. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/2/2020 9:46:00 AM

Nice interpretation. Congrats to win on your wonderful composition. Blessing

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/2/2020 8:05:00 AM

- I love your painting :) - "Nature winks through the portal of scenic bliss" ... beautifully written, Carolyn :) - Congratulations on your third place in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/2/2020 7:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement. You are not forgotten. ~~

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/2/2020 7:08:00 AM

Your lines paint a very tranquil scene. Congratulation on your winning write, Carolyn.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/2/2020 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations on the win! Linda

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/1/2020 2:51:00 PM

The eyes have it! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn. Peace and Serenity, Gershon

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/30/2020 8:42:00 AM

Dear Carolyn, the beauty of your imagery takes my breath away! Nature's tranquil emotions flow through your graceful poem with ease. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan