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Wings of Warmth

"Mother, You are my heartbeat and I'm your lifeline, we both are 'one', as an inseparable hue of purity, smeared upon the sacrosanct lotus..." As you cradle those sleepless stars, swirling in my insomniac flurry ink, lulling me to honeydew-soaked slumber and letting these unicorn-lights twinkle within every pearlescent pulse, my heart flies across gentle wonderlands of fairy-knitted dreams, believing in seraphic miracles. Although, I may have been drenched in cavernous bloodstorms and my heart bleeds russet hail, but, you will always heal my hauntings with your calendula-glazed peridot symphonies, forever shielding my saffron innocence within your womb of compassion, soft like creamy cotton, and periwinkle-rosy flickers of love. I've been blessed with the crimson-gold warmth of a motherly sunflower, amidst this cold autumnal rain of bitter flakes and spiced leaves. You are my white-lotus-winged mermaid, a featherless angel, and this watercolor child will always draw peony-incensed gardens, carrying the fruity fragrance of maternal croons. This lifetime will incessantly echo with nascent harp's harmonies, of a daffodil- daughter's melody for her spring- scented mother, for, it's the only rare truth, that has been revealed amongst onyx blades, scattered across these vulturous skies. I never dream to fathom those lavender beaches of snowy sonnets, without the cashmere caress of your sheen cinnamon shawl, that gives me relief from aching frostbites, rewarded by this wistful world, immersed in apathy. I forevermore wish to be that last 'princess petal', that remains eternally etched to the selfless nurturing of your pinkish throne.

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Date: 11/8/2023 12:07:00 AM
Hiya, this is so beautifully written, and your descriptive notes are absolutely gorgeous. Congratulations on your win with this Brillant write. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 11/7/2023 8:24:00 AM
Another verse full of imagery and feeling. Do you have a magic bag that helps you. Just stunning, keep writing. Congratulation on your win. Many blessings your way my friend.
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Date: 11/7/2023 7:37:00 AM
Hiya! Oh goodness! This is my first reading of your work & Wow! have i been missing out! Instantly i am a follower! I’m off to send you a SoupMail. I throw roses at your feet! Wonderful to meet you! sally
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Date: 11/6/2023 2:02:00 AM
Dear Angelic star! You always know what i would like reading, not just beautiful words, or metaphors! But i love emotions in a poem, and you’ve shown that through your love and appreciation for your mother! Truly you have a heart of gold! So sweet! And your mother raised you very well! You are so disciplined, kind hearted and very intelligent! So please thank her for me, for bringing you up with such strength and teaching you good manners etc! And this poem every word woven here is pure poetic
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Date: 11/6/2023 2:02:00 AM
Brilliance! Congratulations on winning! Well deserved! Thank you for writing
Date: 11/2/2023 11:00:00 AM
Nice tribute to your Mom. You are a superb poet.
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Date: 11/2/2023 7:59:00 AM
A journey through your mystical heart of pain and gratitude dear Hiya . Truly remarkable in its depth of consciousness which I so relate to . Your appreciation for you Mother is palpable as are your intense emotions, My favorite passage- forever shielding my saffron innocence within your womb of compassion. Hugs dear one , Susan :)
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Date: 11/2/2023 6:37:00 AM
I am short of words to appreciate your writing powers. All beautiful words are there in this creative ode to a mother. Keep delighting us poetess . love your unique style of short lines of unusual metaphors that makes poetry such a marvellous creation
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Date: 11/2/2023 6:36:00 AM
Poetry unfolding on so many levels, Blessed to have read and savored this one. Much love and prayers, God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 11/1/2023 3:22:00 PM
a stunningly beautiful creation and expression of gratitude and love for your mother. Your words are simply exquisite and tender. I, too, was blessed with the crimson-gold warmth of a motherly sunflower. Your poem moved me. An outstanding tribute to your mom. I am faving this because it is a true gem, a poetic piece of art, Sara
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Date: 11/1/2023 11:58:00 AM
What a fine tribute to your mother, Hiya. The lines of your elegant poem sing with beauty. Best of wishes.
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Date: 11/1/2023 11:25:00 AM
Dear, Hiya, This is a wonderful homage to your Mom, as the finest guardian of her children. Your words are brilliant and amazingly exquisite. Your lines, such as "fairy-knitted dreams" and "peridot symphonies," are fascinating. With your wonderful diction, this poem carries us on a fantastic adventure into your vast inventiveness. Your mother, who originates spring, was well honored in this tribute. Whatever future brings, I'm glad her sunflower continues to shine. Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 11/1/2023 6:05:00 AM
You are my white-lotus-winged mermaid, a featherless angel, and this watercolor child will always draw peony-incensed gardens, carrying the fruity fragrance of maternal croons-- what an awesome tribute to mother--no better angel in this world for a child. You sparkle with your words, Hiya.
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Date: 11/1/2023 5:58:00 AM
Love it, so graceful and elegant your words are : )
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Date: 11/1/2023 12:43:00 AM
Fairy-knitted dreams and peridot symphonies are just a few of the gorgeous imagery and word choices. This poem has an air of adventure as one reads along as if exploring your exquisite mind's eye with your lovely language being the tour guide. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 10/31/2023 10:48:00 PM
Amazing. What a homage to your spring-scented mother-angel. However vulturous your skies become, I'm glad you have the warmth of her sunflower in your heart. Thank you for teaching me the word "peridot". I'm green with envy at how you somersault with words.
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