Wings

. . in glorious light through magnificent magic, these eyes gently gaze at beauty beyond, the breathtaking butterfly that lingers nearby, with wonder and pride her wings whisper in the wind, as she starts to fly . . ------------- ~ A Triple Haiku ~

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Joseph May

Date: 7/1/2020 2:17:00 PM

Beautiful butterfly poem Brandy, I enjoyed the read

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/1/2020 3:12:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. Butterflies are so elegant and graceful. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

J.W. Earnings

Date: 7/7/2019 1:53:00 AM

I went back to read this and thought you did an amazing job at writing this! Delightful to read tonight.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/7/2019 9:06:00 AM

Thank you J.W. for coming back to read this scribble of mine. This is my first Triple Haiku, so I am a little excited about it. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

J.W. Earnings

Date: 12/11/2018 4:55:00 AM

Wonderful poetry here - you did amazing at writing this. Butterflies are my favorite insect and they are extraordinarily pretty. You expressed yourself well and I wish you a good rest of your December winter - also, a delightful year of 2019

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/11/2018 10:20:00 AM

Thank you J.W. Butterflies are so elegant and graceful. I have always thought so. Beautiful moments linger, while in their presence. Your thoughts uplift my heart. Your kind words are appreciated. Happy Holidays to you and may your have a Happy New year as well. :) Brandy

P.M. Richter

Date: 11/4/2018 6:58:00 AM

I love that butterfly - stopping for a quick kiss and leaves too soon.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/4/2018 6:08:00 PM

Thank you P.M. Richter. That butterfly has spread her wings, and with grace- she is caressing the sky. I appreciate your kind words. :) Brandy

Mark Toney

Date: 8/18/2018 8:36:00 PM

Your triple haiku is superb as is the alliteration throughout. Brilliant, Brandy!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/18/2018 9:25:00 PM

Awe, thank you Mark. I enjoyed writing this. And to have wings- it would be amazing . To drift along the sapphire blue. :) Brandy

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/18/2018 10:23:00 AM

Nice idea with the triple haiku...your pen writes with sweet ink...there's a magic somewhere...All the best B

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/18/2018 6:44:00 PM

Such a wonderful thing to say. I believe you are right- about there being magic in this poem. :) Thank you Arturo. My best to you. Always!! ~ Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 8/17/2018 12:02:00 PM

Wonderful haiku's, Brandy! You have described the beauty of the butterflies in such little words...Love these! ~Charlie

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/17/2018 1:09:00 PM

Thank you Charles. Theses words flowed so easily, and so- this triple haiku was born. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 8/17/2018 9:37:00 AM

I often marvel at the beauty of a butterfly fluttering by much the same as a beautiful woman passing by, both beautiful free spirits, the butterfly's wings whisper like the wind and the woman's hair blows with the whispers of the wind. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/17/2018 10:47:00 AM

Your thoughts hold so much truth, as the movement of a woman- is very poetic indeed. So elegant and graceful. :) Thank you John. Your kind words bring a smile. ~ Brandy

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/17/2018 12:34:00 AM

I like the exquisiteness of this heartfelt triple haiku.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/17/2018 10:44:00 AM

Thank you Caren. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/16/2018 9:53:00 PM

As delicate in beauty and as exquisite in flow as her wings whispering in the wind. A breathtaking triple haiku, Brandy. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/16/2018 10:15:00 PM

Your kind words always come from the heart. Such a lovely thing to say. Thank you Susan. I appreciate you. ~ Brandy

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/16/2018 8:11:00 PM

this 'ku takes my breath away; so flowing, brandy!...huggs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/16/2018 9:19:00 PM

Awe, thank you nette. Your thoughts make my heart smile. :) Brandy

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/16/2018 6:46:00 PM

A nicely descriptive triple write.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/16/2018 7:12:00 PM

Thank you Robert!! You kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy