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"Life is fragile and temporary. The faces of today quickly become the faces of the past. Sorrow, pain, and anger... it all fades, except love. Love is forever and thereafter, even when we've fallen to our graves." ~ Lee Argus "How fragile is life in nature's forceful wind..." Dylan Thomas wrote of October winds and their punishing frosty fingers. He called them an "autumnal spell." Autumn...the season when leaves hang trembling. Christina Rosetti's lines have been well read.. "Who has seen the wind? Neither you nor I. But when the trees bow down their heads, the wind is passing by." Shakespeare spoke to zephyrs, "Blow, blow," he wrote, declaring their breath to be not as rude as man's, but in my observances, I find them circumspect with crude treatment of many fragile things. Spiders weave gossamer webs to rival Chantilly lace in labyrinthine patterns, with lengths of silver thread. Tiny arachnids, do not let nature's force tatter the tangled trammels they tenaciously spin. Dandelions, awash in golden petals, does the wind whisper, "Prepare yourself to fly with me on a magical flight?" You, the delicate dreamer... the wind, a wily schemer. He'll pluck your blooms with blustery swirls and sweep your seed tufts away with gusts and puffs. Percy Shelley composed an ode in which he labeled the wind an "impulsive destroyer," His thoughts are sad but true. I worry over such trivial things, painfully aware that there is little I can do. I frown as a snowflake melts when its misfortune is to settle on my cheek. Tumbled from the sky to its demise when it touches me. There's a word for my melancholia... whispered with a smile ~ a m b e d o ~ A gentle word that's not allowed to float upon the wind. "Come, come, thou bleak December wind, and blow the dry leaves from the tree!" Coleridge called out, but to him it signaled death. The breath of gales takes many lives; not just leaves, but the bird and the butterfly. I wept like a child of four when a butterfly I found lay dead upon the ground, and I think it quite profound that a creature whose name ends in 'fly' is killed when it tries to aviate as it was meant to do. In such moments, I realize how hard it is for them to survive and sorrow finds a shadowed place deep within my heart where too often it thrives in the dark. Yeats penned the lines, "What need have you to dread the monstrous crying of wind?" My rebuttal would be... "What need has the wind to judge what lives or dies?" And once again I realize... How fragile is life in nature's forceful wind.

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Date: 1/23/2024 9:55:00 PM
Love the painting and the quote, Lin. Your poem was a masterpiece of free verse. I enjoy the references to famous poets and their poems, and the personal touch shared through your own experiences. I especially enjoyed the last two verses and the heartfelt rebuttal to Yeats question. Like mankind, all of God's creature have their own trials and tribulations. It was a joy to catch up some on your soulful poetry, my friend. I'll be back for more soon. A FAV, A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 1/24/2024 6:53:00 AM
Bill, I read your comments twice and smiled at your sincerity each time. I love writing poems about nature... when she's kind and when she's in a fit of rage. I appreciate your reads and reviews very much. Thank you, my kind Texas friend.
Date: 1/23/2024 3:31:00 PM
WOW!
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Date: 1/23/2024 5:03:00 PM
That's one word that means as much to me as a full length review. Thank you, John.
Date: 1/21/2024 10:36:00 AM
I do love the way you used the great poets words, and formulated your poem around them Lin, indeed winds and storms shape the world we live in, I’m not sure if it judges us per se, but damn it can appear merciless at times, we’re getting hammered right now by storm Isha, glad I’m not out in a boat tonight, a wonderful captivating poem on the brittleness of life, cheers David
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Date: 1/21/2024 10:52:00 AM
Thanks, David. Some of the great ones have written so much poetry about Mariah, and her strength. I've had a few run ins with her over the years with her terrifying hurricane winds. Tom told me about Isha. No boating tonight... stay safe indoors.
Date: 1/21/2024 9:09:00 AM
WOW!!!  What a wonderful write/picture/quote/ending. Love It... Have a wonderful day writing away..............
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Date: 1/21/2024 10:50:00 AM
Thank you for the many kind comments you leave for my poetry. I'm grateful for your time and encouragement.
Date: 1/21/2024 9:04:00 AM
Life is indeed fragile Lin, we are always at the mercy of mother nature, it is her that calls the shots. Isha has arrived with strong gusts and heavy rain. You put a lot of effort in to this one, a fave for me. Tom
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Date: 1/21/2024 9:09:00 AM
Thank you for recognizing the effort, Tom. You don't miss a thing. ;-) That's what makes you a great poet and friend. Please take care with your awful weather conditions.
Date: 1/21/2024 7:45:00 AM
stunning, Lin. How well you've captured the fragility and impermanence of life and nature. Not familiar with Shelley's ode (Impulsive Destroyer). Will have to find it and read it. The title was so appropriate and I'm grateful for you sharing other poet's thoughts & poems. A captivating read, dear Lin. enjoy your day, Sara
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Date: 1/21/2024 8:38:00 AM
It's his 'Ode to the West Wind.' Thank you so much for your patience to read the length of this one, Sara. I appreciate you for that and the many kind comments you offer my poetry. I'm having a great Sunday so far and hope the same for you and Bill.

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