Windsong

~ In eggshell dark before the dawn, I've tiptoed out to touch the stars. It's empty where my heart belongs. In eggshell dark, before the dawn, one star, we both had wished upon, contrived with wind, to take you far. In eggshell dark, before the dawn, I've tiptoed out to touch the stars. I call your name. It echoes on, praying that, somewhere, you listen. Wind stirs the words, but dreams are gone I call your name. It echoes on. Without you here, there is no song. Sunrise comes, yet stars still glisten I call your name. It echoes on, praying that, somewhere, you listen
_____________________________________________ Contest sponsored by Nicola Byrne's "Long Distant Love"
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Guzzi Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 7:39 PM
Conrad's on your win. Light & Love
Hamilton Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 4:59 AM
superb Carrie congrats on win hugs
A. Sharma Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 8:32 AM
Very lovely Carrie ! Congrats on huge win !
Lamoureux Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 8:14 AM
Bravo! Congratulations.
Johnson Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 10:47 PM
I don't think she finds this irritating. A lovely triolet form. Congratulations on your no. 1 win. Love, Joyce .
Mehta Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 8:46 PM
Lovely take on the theme and congrats on the win, Carrie
Puddifoot Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 6:15 PM
you never fail me, carrie! a lovely double triolet here: poised, poignant, beautifully penned; andrea was right - I do love it! (it's striking how similar the three 1st place poems are in subject matter) congrats on your 1st place win in my contest :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 3:54 PM
charlotte is going to love this, Carrie. It is SO beautiful!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 11:41 AM
I am honored to be the first to comment on this beauty. I really enjoy repeating forms, it helps them resonate more fully with me. Well done!
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