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W Words Sponsored by: Constance La France

Written 8/15/2023

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Sunlight streams through the stain glass window. Painted print, rainbow upon the floor With a nascent sun movement out-pour; Specks of dust slow dance in the shadow. Children run down the stairs, yet robust, Merry dance full of songs and games play. Dog and cat amusement chase all day. Tipped deep breath blown; then fades in stardust. Window, portal of flickering light. Night deepens in hues, light goes away. New birth, of the world's flow in, each day. A perfect joyful welcoming sight.

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Date: 8/16/2023 12:05:00 PM
- I knew it would be high on the winner's list, Eve ... congratulations :) - hugs
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Date: 8/16/2023 10:53:00 AM
Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading this pretty write again. I love your pretty glass windows. Have a great day with your win............
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Date: 8/16/2023 7:32:00 AM
"Night deepens in hues, light goes away" - Highly poetic. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/16/2023 6:01:00 AM
Eve, your imagery is consistently exceptional. Your writing is impressively crafted, my friend. Congratulations on your outstanding Win.
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Date: 8/16/2023 4:50:00 AM
Lovely write. Enjoyed. Congrats on the top win. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 8/15/2023 1:59:00 PM
Lovely photo and well-written poem, Eve. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. Bill
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Date: 8/15/2023 1:30:00 PM
A lovely poem. I too, love stained windows. Love the line,’Window, portal of flickering light’.Great! Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 8/15/2023 12:21:00 PM
A pretty write/picture. I love stain glass windows. "Good Luck" I also did W... Have a great day.............
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Date: 8/15/2023 10:38:00 AM
- A colorful pleasure to look at, Eve ... a beautiful poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 8/15/2023 10:21:00 AM
A perfect poem. Loved its nuances and shade of color. Best for a win.
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