Wind Song, With Birds

The wind
howled ice-cold, clear-sky
lullabies

and awoke the moon,
who gazed, heavy-lidded,
at the stars around her

Leaves and dust
danced sambas and pirouetted
along the desert's river,

who was shivering uncontrollably
while midnight birds
struggled to fly upstream

against the manic,
stinging, musical currents
of turbulence and wonder
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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July 21, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Rev, this is awesome... SKAT
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September 28, 2012 at 9:15 AM
Nice as usual...:) I love birds, poor birds !
Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 4:02 AM
Love the expressive and descriptive lines. Doesn't sound very inviting. Sara
Goff Avatar
June 11, 2009 at 8:32 PM
fine work! Rebecca, Jim
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May 3, 2009 at 2:23 PM
Rebecca, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Mason Avatar
April 11, 2009 at 3:33 PM
Good luck to you in the contest, Rebecca. Been too long since you posted here at the Soup!! Come back soon and let me know when your day/month birthday is so I can add you to my sing/blog list ... smile ...
Brown Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 7:08 AM
Rebecca, congratulations on your three poems making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Mckenzie Avatar
February 28, 2009 at 6:54 AM
I love this strong imagery you used to convey a message! Congratulations on your featured poem of the week Laura :)
Brown Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 6:51 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 9:06 AM
Beautiful poem Rebecca - Congratulations on being featured this week - God Bless, MJ
Townsend Avatar
February 23, 2009 at 11:20 PM
Congratulations on being featured. This is a really nice write. I love the imagery! Smiles from Lolita
Winter Avatar
February 23, 2009 at 4:59 PM
Warmest congrats dear Rebecca on your awesome poetry being featured this week. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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February 23, 2009 at 2:57 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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February 23, 2009 at 9:29 AM
Congrats Reverand, on being featured this week with "Wind Song, With Birds." Vince
Mason Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 4:13 PM
Oooooh, too vivid here and I'm freezing ... smile ... my little dog isn't real crazy about the snow we're having either ... LOL ... outstanding writing here Ms. Rebecca and great imagery!! Hope you have a warm, wonderful holiday and that '09 is a great year for you!!
Hudson Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 7:41 PM
I am so, so grateful for all your awesome comments. I must admit, out of the hundreds, if not thousands of poems I've written over the last few years, this one really, really pleases me deeply, as, apparently, it does all of you. Thanks to all of you so very much!
Burton Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 7:36 PM
great poem, great flow of words, feeling the raw passion in this here, thanks for sharing.
Reynolds Avatar
December 2, 2008 at 2:33 AM
Amazing expression of the tireless wind (my favorite) just beautiful word choices and I too, felt like I was watching and feeling it all, excellent. love, Kristin
George   Avatar
December 2, 2008 at 2:07 AM
Wow!!!!! What a picture you paint here, dear Rebecca. Powerful - filled with motion and sound and a fantastic ambiance. Thank you for sharing. Elaine
Jordan Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 6:56 PM
Rev. Rebecca this poem is beautiful and the title fits so perfectly - God Bless, MJ
Richards Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 6:04 PM
I'm loving so many lines in your poem,( to name one..."the leaves that danced sambas and pirouretted"...that is so charming!! A lovely poem! Best Wishes...keep writing for us! ~ Carrie
Winter Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 5:47 PM
Hey you! So wonderful to read you here. You have captured nature to such a wondrous and enchanting level with your words. Described so vividly, so magically. A cold, windy gorgeous beautiful moon shining night! Feel like I am there! Awesome! Love, Shar
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December 1, 2008 at 5:13 PM
Love the title, love the verse, love the talent...very nice work.
Hudson Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 5:11 PM
Thank you so much!
Gorelick Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 4:39 PM
I'm with john, that is a wonderful phrase.BG
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