Wind Song

A slight breeze brings the trees motion A ballet of graceful loving song Inspired By Constance

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Francine Roberts

Date: 9/10/2010 10:38:00 AM

beautiful, love it

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/10/2010 8:59:00 AM

What a beautiful ballet this is to watch! I used to be a ballerina when I was a little girl and once had to play a "tree." True! Please check your soup mail again. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/9/2010 11:44:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your impressive poetry today Rick. Have not read for almost a week now. I had a wonderful vacation. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2010 3:45:00 AM

Very descriptive of the breezes in the trees..If for a contest, good luck for it reads like a winner..Thanks for selecting my poem for a place in your contest..I enjoyed writing several with your idea for the contest..Thanks again..I know that it was hard to select the winners for the contest with all the great ones that were written...Sara

Constance La France

Date: 9/8/2010 7:34:00 PM

Well done Rick, I really like this Crystalline form, we can weite something so awesome in just a few words.. .. I love the wind.. it is windy tonight and I just want to stand outside and let it pull my hair. and the wind is a ballet for sure, I can hear it whispering through the maple trees outside my window ...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/8/2010 5:52:00 PM

Nice images describing Wind Song, Rick