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Premiere Contest WinnerWind Ruffled Petals

A warm breeze rustles through the leaves as flowers bloom this summer day. 'round wind ruffled petals it weaves. Windswept, the weeping willows sway, and songbirds nest in branches high as flowers bloom this summer day. Drizzling showers rain from the sky in little puddles on the ground, and songbirds nest in branches high. When the sun appears, they’ll be found bathing and preening without fears in little puddles on the ground. Their twitters, music to my ears while the zephyr is blowing free, bathing and preening without fears. Such antics are soothing to me. A warm breeze rustles through the leaves while the zephyr is blowing free. 'round wind ruffled petals it weaves. May 20, 2023 Inklings Poetry Contest Sponsored by Gina McIntosh
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Kendrick Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 9:36 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
Lane Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 9:39 AM
Thanks for leaving me your thoughts, Sara.
Daniel Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 12:04 AM
Beautiful, congratulations:)
Lane Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 9:38 AM
Thank you sincerely, Jo.
Peck Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 3:28 PM
Lovely, Lin! Congratulations!
Lane Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 3:57 PM
Thanks a bunch, Ann.
Narain Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 10:31 AM
Nice,,detailes description. Congrats.
Lane Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 3:56 PM
Thanks so very much, Jay.
Roger  Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 3:30 AM
Beautiful... Just like life... Congratulations...
Lane Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 9:08 AM
Thank you for such a wonderful comment, Roger.
Mcintosh Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 2:35 AM
Just love this, sweet friend. God bless you and Congrats on your top win. Love, Gina
Lane Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 9:07 AM
Gina, thank you ever so much for appreciating my ruffled petals. It's an honor to have received a place on your winning list.
Baker Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 3:47 PM
The joy of observing life, be it people or our friends that fly. Your imagery is illuminating and brings your words to life, Lin. I enjoyed your entry for the contest. Good luck my friend. Bill
Lane Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 2:56 AM
Good morning, Bill and thank you for offering my poem such wonderful comments.
Lawrence Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 6:35 AM
Sweet melodic beauty you have painted dear Lin ! I love the part about the songbirds ~ bathing and preening without fears in little puddles on the ground ! I can see and hear them now . Lovely poem ! Susan :)
Lane Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 6:37 AM
Morning, Susan and thank you so very sincerely! Reward for a poet is knowing a poem has come to life to a reader.
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