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A warm breeze rustles through the leaves as flowers bloom this summer day. 'round wind ruffled petals it weaves. Windswept, the weeping willows sway, and songbirds nest in branches high as flowers bloom this summer day. Drizzling showers rain from the sky in little puddles on the ground, and songbirds nest in branches high. When the sun appears, they’ll be found bathing and preening without fears in little puddles on the ground. Their twitters, music to my ears while the zephyr is blowing free, bathing and preening without fears. Such antics are soothing to me. A warm breeze rustles through the leaves while the zephyr is blowing free. 'round wind ruffled petals it weaves. May 20, 2023 Inklings Poetry Contest Sponsored by Gina McIntosh

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Date: 5/29/2023 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
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Date: 5/29/2023 9:39:00 AM
Thanks for leaving me your thoughts, Sara.
Date: 5/29/2023 12:04:00 AM
Beautiful, congratulations:)
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Date: 5/29/2023 9:38:00 AM
Thank you sincerely, Jo.
Date: 5/28/2023 3:28:00 PM
Lovely, Lin! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/28/2023 3:57:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, Ann.
Date: 5/28/2023 10:31:00 AM
Nice,,detailes description. Congrats.
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Date: 5/28/2023 3:56:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Jay.
Date: 5/28/2023 3:30:00 AM
Beautiful... Just like life... Congratulations...
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Date: 5/28/2023 9:08:00 AM
Thank you for such a wonderful comment, Roger.
Date: 5/28/2023 2:35:00 AM
Just love this, sweet friend. God bless you and Congrats on your top win. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/28/2023 9:07:00 AM
Gina, thank you ever so much for appreciating my ruffled petals. It's an honor to have received a place on your winning list.
Date: 5/20/2023 3:47:00 PM
The joy of observing life, be it people or our friends that fly. Your imagery is illuminating and brings your words to life, Lin. I enjoyed your entry for the contest. Good luck my friend. Bill
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Date: 5/21/2023 2:56:00 AM
Good morning, Bill and thank you for offering my poem such wonderful comments.
Date: 5/20/2023 6:35:00 AM
Sweet melodic beauty you have painted dear Lin ! I love the part about the songbirds ~ bathing and preening without fears in little puddles on the ground ! I can see and hear them now . Lovely poem ! Susan :)
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Date: 5/20/2023 6:37:00 AM
Morning, Susan and thank you so very sincerely! Reward for a poet is knowing a poem has come to life to a reader.

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