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Wind Chimes

I Hear Your Song Edward Ibeh "YALTO" invented poetry form The wind has a song to sing as it breaks the silence. In the middle of the night on the porch wind chimes spin in time, the elder oak quick to latch in its branches. Crickets and the frogs chant make you feel not alone. 8/27/2018
Poetry Contest: Wind Chimes Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh YALTO invented poetry form Blog: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=33861&PoetID=75409 Poem: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/unfulfilled_dream_1035968

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Date: 9/12/2018 5:03:00 AM
The perfect accompaniment to the wind's songs; wind chimes. A well done piece of poetry. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/9/2018 8:56:00 PM
So cleverly won, Eve. BIG congrats!!
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Date: 9/1/2018 2:51:00 PM
oh clever you for using Edward's form. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/30/2018 2:38:00 PM
Hello Eve, i like the wind chimes,it has a pretty tune. I enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/30/2018 1:39:00 PM
Super poem; love the lines: "the elder oak quick to latch in its branches."
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Date: 8/29/2018 1:49:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest! Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Eve! You absolutely nailed my form!. As soon as I read it, I knew I'd place it. Nicely done!
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Date: 8/28/2018 5:44:00 PM
Oh he is going to just love what you did with his form, Eve. Genius idea to use that form with the theme!
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Date: 8/29/2018 1:53:00 PM
I came across it, and I was like..."that's an automatic placement!" lol
Date: 8/28/2018 12:26:00 AM
summer summer night...dada dadada ...sung to "starry starry night"
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Date: 8/27/2018 10:08:00 PM
Nice and touching
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Date: 8/27/2018 7:57:00 PM
Lovely, Eve. Bravo.
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