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Wind Chimes

Wind chimes they tinkle with hellish pride ring-tingling eardrums knock-knocking on my mind sing-a-long, children with huge black eyes it started so quietly whispering of fairies and teacups and crumpets with crumbs contracting fast and furious a tortuous twister a seasonal labor pain the toxic sound off the charts the itty bitty eyes dart back and forth like a gruesome clock on the wall Wind chimes suddenly die Lifting off like a flying saucer I see them go… 8/18/2018 Sponsored by Edward Ibeh Contest: Wind Chimes

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Eve Roper

Date: 9/15/2018 7:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Kim. ~`* Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/15/2018 10:13:00 PM

Thank you, Eve! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/1/2018 2:47:00 PM

Many congrats on your win Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2018 3:15:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 8/29/2018 2:55:00 PM

Thanks for entering my contest, Kim!:-) Simply a wonderful write! Congratulations on your fabulous win!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2018 4:02:00 PM

Thank you, Edward! :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/20/2018 9:38:00 AM

Your words enter my mind, resonate there, and force me to feel their weightlessness as they float away with the wind to sing another day in their own specular way. Emile.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2018 10:08:00 AM

Thanks so much, Emile!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/19/2018 8:33:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, Kim. This is amazingly fun to read!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2018 10:01:00 PM

Thank you, Caren!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/19/2018 10:33:00 AM

Who wouldn't to sing a melodic song along with the wind dear, Kim? Inspiring! Good luck my friend!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2018 11:30:00 AM

Thank you, Demetrios! :)