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Wind Chimes

Breezes ebb and rise as gentle as night tides, tinkling wind chimes dangling from eaves, their glass prisms flickering by the porch light like moths. They are my stars in sky's chasm. Among shy notes played by a gust birds adorn rustling leaves as spritely morning sun dances through bending branches, followed by waves' hush over an opalescent beach. In the drowse of shadows I exult in memories just as August's zephyrs tickle my lobes and flirt with my hair. But in passing eons I grew up, residing under stars overpowered by neon mockery. As I sit behind my house I'm no longer a creature of wild land, but a fixture in manufactured opulence, tintinnabulation of garnish the impetus for my vicarious life. On warm nights vistas cascade, reeling behind closed eyes, lifted in youth's ebullience by winds and glistening skies, inhaling life with feral breaths of the sea. 8/18/18 Wind Chime Contest--Edward Ibeh Eight Word Challenge--John Hamilton

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Date: 12/11/2018 5:34:00 AM
This is a marvelous poem!! Love every single line and appreciated, reading this masterpiece tonight
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 12/11/2018 7:47:00 AM
Thanks very much, JW.
Date: 9/4/2018 8:44:00 PM
Sincere congratulations for your win in John's contest, Dale, your imagery and description is always so rich and vibrant ... really superb writing - blessings and continued success, my friend! :-)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/5/2018 8:20:00 AM
Thanks, Greg.
Date: 9/3/2018 5:50:00 PM
Beautiful ! Congratulations for your win. :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/3/2018 5:55:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi.
Date: 9/3/2018 3:54:00 PM
Very good use of this entry. Congratulations.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/3/2018 4:22:00 PM
Thank you, Sian.
Date: 9/3/2018 3:18:00 PM
Congrats Dale on an amazing write, and top win!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/3/2018 4:22:00 PM
Thanks much, John.
Date: 9/1/2018 2:23:00 PM
such gorgeous imagery Dale and some unusual word choices too, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/1/2018 2:25:00 PM
Many thanks, Jan!
Date: 8/30/2018 11:20:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win, well done Dale...
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/30/2018 11:24:00 AM
Thanks very much, Charlie. Good to hear from you.
Date: 8/29/2018 2:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Dale.
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Date: 8/29/2018 2:11:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, Dale! Phenomenal write! Congratulations on your top win!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/29/2018 2:16:00 PM
Thanks so much, Edward.
Date: 8/21/2018 12:48:00 AM
Well executed my friend...best for a fantastic win, Dale...^WW^
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/21/2018 8:21:00 AM
Thanks very much, WW!
Date: 8/18/2018 3:22:00 PM
Great entry Dale, best wishes...
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/18/2018 4:52:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie.
Date: 8/18/2018 1:29:00 PM
that read like a write-painting...very nice
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/18/2018 1:31:00 PM
Thanks, Sand Blown.

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