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For Ink Empress' Poetm of Your Heart Contest... Written 7 Aug 2024...Submitted 19 Dec 2024

Wind Chime

I've somehow pondered about the 
   rush of air
of how I could be lulled on billows, and  
   yet, 
its notes upon my flesh eludes me--
as if in midnight trailing, weeping in refrains
this cadence glides beyond 
    streetlamps
on to my litanies, my expectations, my 
    tears
until I'm drenched by a melody ambient
     as the sound of breeze.

Like a rain-child born in January 
     with taps in my veins,  I become 
a listener of seasons' tingling tunes
which inhabit my thoughts : and to 
know my heart's kept secrets are
 cuddled through this rhythmic hisses,
      arias of both my dark and lustrous hours.

Now I trace the reel of fleeting memories dating from youth to mid- adult...this old wind chime wrapped in chrome
       and antique stones fondle
timeless music whipped by storms,
       rhapsodies,  deaths of my 
       life...a hanging rune delivering me
from all I must bear--
       though owned by Mom's as a hoard or  collection, it was my precious harbinger:
 but it echoes no more
       in spaces where I loved, and still 
       need to love back... 

Gazing at this chime of four decades drifting gently on the room knob, it has

     become mute,  aged... but cared for like a most treasured keepsake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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George Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 6:11 AM
Dear Nette, this is such a lovely poem. The old wind chime evokes so many dear memories in you. Now though it has aged, it rests as the most treasured keepsake. The passage of time etches marks on everyone. Your lines have a special sweetness and deep nostalgic associations, bewitching my heart and this goes into my FAVE.
Ashley Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 7:31 AM
Dear Nette, your poetic expression has the power to touch my soul ever so deeply. Beautifully poignant from the depths of your heart to softly resonant within the depths of mine. Congratulations for your success in Ink's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Empress Avatar
December 25, 2024 at 6:58 AM
Somewhere between those ethereal lines flowing in such a delicate and soulful manner, i just got lost! I really love every lines in this especially your mention of rain child born in january resonates and also the way youv written in such a descriptive manner is truly impressive! I especially love “ as if in midnight trailing, weeping in refrains this cadence glides beyond street lamps on to my litanies, my expectations,” ah! Just soulfully moving! ! Congratulations on your top win. FAVE
Hind Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 3:43 PM
Just beautiful. I have a thing for chimes. Your write so enchanted me today. A fav-
Beaufort Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 11:50 AM
Nette, you so very sweetly describe how you think about life and the passage of time and events. You have a very kind heart that just comes through in your poetry. You're making me smile all the time!
Bayles Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 7:52 AM
I like it. Great line- "I've somehow pondered about the rush of air."
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 6:48 AM
Romanticism and charm in your poem! I could see this story unfolding like a movie narrator. Brings us back in time to childhood and unwraps a tale. Hugs ~ Kim
Cunningham Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 9:53 PM
They make such a lovely sound in a gentle breeze. Tom
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 5:16 PM
Hello Nette, it is your keepsake. I love the wind chime. I like the sound it makes. Hugs. /Darlene/
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