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breeze pleasant moving leaves a summers day butterfly glides past a monarch probably wind picks up a little bit the sky transforms from blue to gray you run to get pants from your clothes line tornado sirens are heard in distance

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Date: 6/29/2021 3:49:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this Etheree. Your wording and imagery are stunning, I always had difficulties doing this form, but here it seems easy to pen. Kindest regards, dear Caren
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/29/2021 11:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Lasaad
Date: 6/29/2021 8:46:00 AM
I like how you used the form to enhance the subject matter, starting slow and building. Nice work, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/29/2021 11:42:00 PM
Thank you Hank
Date: 6/28/2021 11:00:00 PM
I love the way the poem builds from a breeze to a tornado .. I wondered from the title if it was gong to be about farting lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/29/2021 11:42:00 PM
Maybe next time

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