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Willful Living

years of pain sometimes unbearable terminal illness progresses your future – always in God’s hands abilities slip away swiftly no longer able to care for yourself friends and family create distance but my Living Will brings comfort comatose patients can linger for years life-pumping feeding tubes and respirators false hope instilled in loved ones watching and praying for a miracle no machines will keep my body alive I’ll not go out this way as my “Rage Against the Dying of the Light” closes my spirit’s eager to explore eternal life no viewing or funeral just a blessing of last rights ashes scattered in the Atlantic sea where cool waters carry memories both life and death *Written February 16, 2012 for Catie’s “Free Verse” contest

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Date: 2/18/2012 2:55:00 PM
Hey Carolyn..) Cool Lady... i could be close to tears..? yet also, i feel a reassurance from the words you use..! and i feel your poise..i am glad to know you,, glad to be a fellow writer on " the soup" i will keep in touch,, always..Joe..)
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Date: 2/18/2012 10:18:00 AM
Wonderful! I believe you have, at some time, had a revelation. To not fear death is such a blessing. This one brought a tear. LOve, daver
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Date: 2/17/2012 4:34:00 AM
A very heartfeltwrite. Good luck with your health. I will say a prayer for you
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Date: 2/16/2012 5:04:00 PM
A very courageous well written write Carolyn....a living will eases the difficult decisions that loved ones left behind have to make when there is no will. Bravo!
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Date: 2/16/2012 4:47:00 PM
What a sad realization of the facts of one's life! I hate knowing that this is your realization, that of a terminal illness! I believe you will be with us for many more years Carolyn, and hopefully good years! At least you will have a lot of support, you can count on me for support, I'll be here for you! This poem says a lot and I believe a lot of people will join me and be with you throughout your troubles! This is a wonderful poem! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/16/2012 4:43:00 PM
Loved the way this came together and with such feeling , Good luck in the contest Carolyn , hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx
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