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Will You Tell Them Or Shall I

Will you tell them, Or Shall I? That their investment will be gone in thirty seconds, And there will be no time for seconds. Will you tell them, Or shall I? That climate change, Will leave them with no change. Will You tell them, Or shall I? That electric cars may not be eccentric, But teaching them only one trick is eccentric. Will you tell them, Or shall I? That cars that cannot fly will be a money drain, That cars that cannot swim will end up stuck in the drain. Will you tell them, Or shall I? That cars that cannot negotiate a slip, Will cause those on the rich list to slip. Will you tell them, Or shall I? That cars that cannot stand when there is a wind up, Will leave investors with the wind up.

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Date: 12/5/2021 6:21:00 AM
Good you told me ... and PS. A carefully-thought-out poem, with technical merits as with repetition and rhetorical questions (Attention-Grabbers). Thanx much, PEACE
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David Smith
Date: 12/5/2021 9:28:00 AM
Peace to you too. Fit for purpose seems foreign to most. Same with quality verses price. Oh the muddle we get ourselves into. Poetry tells us so much about many things. Long may you keep writing your words on the soup. I learn much from other poets on the soup and appreciate the kind words. Stay safe David in NZ

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