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Will You Marry Me

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Romance you take my hand.. let’s dance! You kiss my ruby lips what bliss! Red rose on bended knee - propose! Finding Your Musette Poetry Contest Sponsored By Joseph May 2,4,2 checked with how many syllables and rhymezone 04/07/20

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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 4/18/2020 11:36:00 AM
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Jan, this is so darn cute!! And of course absolutely a delight.
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Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/18/2020 10:40:00 AM
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Cute and tender. Congratulations
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David Mohn
Date: 4/16/2020 9:26:00 PM
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this is lovely Jan...congratulations!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/16/2020 5:19:00 PM
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Adorable, Jan, you did marvelously with the form. Congratulations to you.
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Beata Agustin
Date: 4/16/2020 6:22:00 AM
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Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this delightful piece, with the lovely photo. God bless you.
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Joseph May
Date: 4/15/2020 6:32:00 PM
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So romantic Jan, Congrats on your win..
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John Watt
Date: 4/15/2020 6:00:00 PM
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Jan, this was a charming write and adorable image, I guess I forgot to say both of those things last time I visited so I'm glad I came by again. A beautiful and touching romantic vibe to this. Congrats on your #1 placement, my friend >>> Soupmail...
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John Watt
Date: 4/10/2020 11:33:00 PM
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Great write, Jan. So much with so little. Good luck in the contest, and stay safe. Hugs ~ John
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/9/2020 6:11:00 PM
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This is adorable! The poem and the photo!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 4/9/2020 5:29:00 PM
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Great Job Jan. What an adorable picture. Great poem
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/8/2020 7:09:00 PM
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Will you...I do! Charming, Jan!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/8/2020 7:34:00 AM
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- A lovely poem ... sweet photo :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/7/2020 8:58:00 PM
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Ooh la la! I'm ready; all in. Send me your hand online, my dear! Love this one Jan! So sweet! :) Gershon
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Michael Burch
Date: 4/7/2020 6:29:00 PM
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A sweet poem to go with an incredibly cute picture. Very well done!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/7/2020 6:15:00 PM
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I needed to smile today and you have succeeded in doing just that. Thank you for the sensual innocence, xo
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Ronald D Thompson
Date: 4/7/2020 4:18:00 PM
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Exquisitely put together Jan. Penned beautifully. Best wishes..Ron xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 4/7/2020 4:11:00 PM
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so very sweet, jan! i enjoyed...
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/7/2020 3:23:00 PM
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Such a tender poem, Jan. Like Tom said, I hope she, or maybe he, said yes! Good luck in the contest.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/7/2020 3:27:00 PM
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thanks Sam, I struggle with romantic poems but I had to go out of my comfort zone for this contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/7/2020 2:30:00 PM
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I hope she said yes Jan, cute pic. Good luck. Tom
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/7/2020 3:24:00 PM
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Thanks Tom, i couldn't resist the pic I thought it was adorable:-) hugs jan xx
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/7/2020 2:17:00 PM
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Joseph May find this a winner! Aloha! Rico
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/7/2020 3:23:00 PM
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Thanks Rico, makes a change from my favourite limerick form:-) hugs Jan xx
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2020 1:14:00 PM
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Nice Jan, best wishes in the contest...
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/7/2020 1:26:00 PM
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Thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx
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David Mchattie
Date: 4/7/2020 1:06:00 PM
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Love the photo. Love the poem. Well done. Have a great day my friend.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/7/2020 1:26:00 PM
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Thanks David, I struggle to write romance I much prefer humour:-) the pic was so cute I couldn't resist using it:-) hugs jan xx

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