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Will You Marry Me

Romance
you take my hand..
let’s dance!
 
You kiss
my ruby lips
what bliss!

Red rose
on bended knee -
propose!

Finding Your Musette Poetry Contest

Sponsored By Joseph May

2,4,2 checked with how many syllables and rhymezone

04/07/20

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Lonna Blodgett Date: 4/18/2020 11:36:00 AM Jan, this is so darn cute!! And of course absolutely a delight. Login to Reply

Jc Hawkens Date: 4/18/2020 10:40:00 AM Cute and tender. Congratulations Login to Reply

David Mohn Date: 4/16/2020 9:26:00 PM this is lovely Jan...congratulations! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/16/2020 5:19:00 PM Adorable, Jan, you did marvelously with the form. Congratulations to you. Login to Reply

Beata Agustin Date: 4/16/2020 6:22:00 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this delightful piece, with the lovely photo. God bless you. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 4/15/2020 6:32:00 PM So romantic Jan, Congrats on your win.. Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 4/15/2020 6:00:00 PM Jan, this was a charming write and adorable image, I guess I forgot to say both of those things last time I visited so I'm glad I came by again. A beautiful and touching romantic vibe to this. Congrats on your #1 placement, my friend >>> Soupmail... Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 4/10/2020 11:33:00 PM Great write, Jan. So much with so little. Good luck in the contest, and stay safe. Hugs ~ John Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 4/9/2020 6:11:00 PM This is adorable! The poem and the photo! Login to Reply

Mark Koplin Date: 4/9/2020 5:29:00 PM Great Job Jan. What an adorable picture. Great poem Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 4/8/2020 7:09:00 PM Will you...I do! Charming, Jan! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/8/2020 7:34:00 AM - A lovely poem ... sweet photo :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 4/7/2020 8:58:00 PM Ooh la la! I'm ready; all in. Send me your hand online, my dear! Love this one Jan! So sweet! :) Gershon Login to Reply

Michael Burch Date: 4/7/2020 6:29:00 PM A sweet poem to go with an incredibly cute picture. Very well done! Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 4/7/2020 6:15:00 PM I needed to smile today and you have succeeded in doing just that. Thank you for the sensual innocence, xo Login to Reply

Ronald D Thompson Date: 4/7/2020 4:18:00 PM Exquisitely put together Jan. Penned beautifully. Best wishes..Ron xx Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 4/7/2020 4:11:00 PM so very sweet, jan! i enjoyed... Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 4/7/2020 3:23:00 PM Such a tender poem, Jan. Like Tom said, I hope she, or maybe he, said yes! Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/7/2020 3:27:00 PM thanks Sam, I struggle with romantic poems but I had to go out of my comfort zone for this contest:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 4/7/2020 2:30:00 PM I hope she said yes Jan, cute pic. Good luck. Tom Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/7/2020 3:24:00 PM Thanks Tom, i couldn't resist the pic I thought it was adorable:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta Date: 4/7/2020 2:17:00 PM Joseph May find this a winner! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/7/2020 3:23:00 PM Thanks Rico, makes a change from my favourite limerick form:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith Date: 4/7/2020 1:14:00 PM Nice Jan, best wishes in the contest... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/7/2020 1:26:00 PM Thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

David Mchattie Date: 4/7/2020 1:06:00 PM Love the photo. Love the poem. Well done. Have a great day my friend. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 4/7/2020 1:26:00 PM Thanks David, I struggle to write romance I much prefer humour:-) the pic was so cute I couldn't resist using it:-) hugs jan xx