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A ghastly cadaver drops, for whose noble sake? To ravish the grandeur of wildlife In the dead of night; to mangle Creation’s gift and its soft flutters, Where each tender beast moves in a row Linking a primal, fond tie with nature’s deities… But the affinity with innocent children, its tribe Is snuffed with one ruthless shot in the forest When pitiless minds become delirious… heinous As a giraffe, a leopard perishes without knowing The lithe body quickly turns into a gaunt shadow, Just like that: unable to play with butterflies And race with own calf or cubs along an inlet... O hollow night, and a lamp of silence are drained By the vicious game from predators, inhumane, That no one can tell, for whose noble sake? 4/10/2016 Silent One’s Contest Images That Make You Think #2

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Date: 4/27/2016 9:34:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your " Images that make you think WIN." Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/16/2016 5:15:00 AM
Magnificent write nette .. congrats on great win!
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Date: 4/15/2016 11:03:00 AM
I'm back to say congratulations for this well deserved win!
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Date: 4/14/2016 9:35:00 PM
I really liked your poetic take on this picture, Nette! Congrats on your win:)
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Date: 4/14/2016 7:16:00 PM
Glad to see this with a big win, Nette. Congratulations to you.
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Date: 4/14/2016 5:50:00 PM
Very well penned Nette, congratulations
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Date: 4/14/2016 5:37:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your placement in the contest, nette. Such an award winning write. Peace dear friend:)
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Date: 4/14/2016 11:30:00 AM
Yes. Including man as, really, of the animal family, the panorama is hard to understand. War is insanity, so the slaying of animal by animal. Your usual thought provoker, dear nette
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Date: 4/12/2016 8:46:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Nette - (I has not had time to read so much poetry in recent days (see my blog) .... sorry :( - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/11/2016 3:03:00 AM
Beautifully executed with masterful impact to tug at emotions Nette. Awe inspiring my friend! #7 ; )
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Date: 4/11/2016 3:04:00 AM
Oh, I didn't know this received POTD! Congratulations Nette! ; )
Date: 4/10/2016 5:09:00 PM
Congratulations on the POTD. My best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 4/10/2016 2:35:00 PM
Congratulations for being featured.........A.M.
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Date: 4/10/2016 10:51:00 AM
a lamp of silence drained...a remarkable image nette...congrats on being featured today
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Date: 4/10/2016 8:11:00 AM
Thank for sharing this gem, congrats for being featured.........A.M.
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Date: 4/10/2016 7:43:00 AM
The slaughter of the innocent...for egoistic pleasure and gain. You talk of a very sad reality, Nette....it's always good to draw attention to it. Congrats on POTD...hugs // paul
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Date: 4/10/2016 7:29:00 AM
A well-written piece, Nette. And congrats on POTD! Hugs.
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Date: 4/10/2016 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations Nette on POTD. Well done...
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Date: 4/10/2016 6:58:00 AM
Back to say Congratulations on POTD. I commented earlier. Peace my friend:)
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Date: 4/10/2016 4:17:00 AM
Yes, why oh why snuff out a beautiful creature just for sport? So eloquently penned, such strength in your words! This was fabulous!
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Date: 4/9/2016 10:02:00 PM
You really captured the essence of this challenge. Love the tone of this piece. By the way, I googled that picture first time I saw it, and was amazed to see it called an elephant!! (I think that is what it said)
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Date: 4/9/2016 9:06:00 PM
Nette, fantastic write, it made me want to weep, you captured the senseless slaughter of God's precious creatures, wonderful 7 +++
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Date: 4/9/2016 6:28:00 PM
This image definitely makes you think. We must not let new species become extinct, Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/9/2016 6:18:00 PM
I love the contemplative spirit of this mighty poem--- something that can't be exactly seen but felt, yet man's savagery exists; poor animals! Your talent is inexhaustible!
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Date: 4/9/2016 5:42:00 PM
So eloquent, Nette. I suppose greed is a dark stain on humanity. I love your interpretation. Good luck my friend:)
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