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Wild Hands

W hile the hands move about in front of me I see them wondering near sincerely L anding their palms right on my pounding head D riving with a power, mighty it’s said H ow much I want them on me, greatly placed A nother realm of understanding faced N ever do they reach my skull, I’m so lost D ays and nights confuse me, in show I’m tossed S hower me with those hands let me be free ! A great massive display of what can be Russell Sivey

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Date: 4/20/2013 11:33:00 AM
It's interesting how you made the whole acrostic a meaningful cohesive unit instead of each line standing on it's own merit. Never seen one written that way. A novel idea. Unique work.
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Date: 4/9/2013 12:08:00 AM
Nice acrostic poem Russell....Seren
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Date: 4/8/2013 10:03:00 PM
This is one great poem. Remember - only you can free yourself from yourself.... Smile - Jesus loves you.... Lucilla
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Date: 4/8/2013 5:10:00 PM
I'm not sure exactly what you mean here Russell, but the poem is very powerful!!
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