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November 5, 2023

Contest : Wild Birds

Sponsored by : Shadow Hamilton

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Wild Birds

After the chill, I return from the wild to the thicket to fly 
as the migratory songbird of the season so charming,
in the rippling crispy breeze of the sparkling spring sky 
of the curved cobalt canvas with my spread-out wing.   

The bird born to beckon the bright flushing dawn light, 
I tweeter to the vibrant tunes of the sunburst shade,
keeping the cadence of the enclosed avian delight 
in my beast beneath the scarlet coat that doesn’t fade. 

When all the yonder thickets are silent in slumber,  
I sing soaring in the silvery tracks of the first sunray. 
The melody I compose for the dawn to remember, 
as on the wings of the wild wind the notes drift away. 

If you see a bird hopping on the bowed boughs bare,
clung to the tree outside your window on the sky blue, 
singing the sunrise song sailing in the drifting dawn air, 
know it’s me, the robin, ushering in a new day for you.
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Fowler Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 2:54 PM
Back with huge congratulations Subimal! :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 9:36 PM
Thank you, Linda.
Hamilton Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 4:18 PM
congrts Subimal on 2nd place good poem hugs Shadow
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 9:36 PM
Thank you, Shadow.
Fowler Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 3:43 PM
Love the "...vibrant tunes of the sunburst shade..." Subimal. This is such a cheery and bright write about the morning tunes of the sweet robin. Your imagery paints a sweet picture! :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 9:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda. You comments are so encouraging.
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