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Why Ted Doesn'T Love Lucy - Bawdy Warning

Ted suffers from 'Looseheel Ball'
It’s driving him clean up the wall
He’s got such an itch
It’s making him twitch
He’s begging the doctor to call

The medic said oh dearie me
This condition I rarely see
Your balls badly twisted
Teds scared eyes soon misted
When  doc says you need surgery

Doc bundles Ted onto the table
and borrows a knife from Aunt Mable
This won’t hurt a bit…
He gives ball a snip
Ted will rise again when he’s able


10/10/21

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Paul Schneiter Date: 10/24/2021 4:01:00 PM ". . . will rise again . . .": too, too funny, Jan (though I felt a sharp pain while reading it). Some people are clever, but you are c l e v e r. Hugs and every good wish for you and your cherished ones. Paul Login to Reply

Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 10/22/2021 9:48:00 AM So funny...Delice Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/21/2021 10:11:00 AM LOL Your bawdiness is enjoyable Jan. Login to Reply

Lindsay Laurie Date: 10/11/2021 7:08:00 PM Hello Jan ... it's easy to see why Ted gets nervous when he faces the surgeon with his knife, and he prays to go for the right ball - thank you Jan - Lindsay Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2021 1:23:00 PM was a fun poem to write lol:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/11/2021 4:36:00 PM Willing to be snipped …must of been a very bad itch! lol…ouch Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2021 1:22:00 PM thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/11/2021 3:26:00 PM haha. That was a fun read, Jan! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2021 1:22:00 PM thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 10/11/2021 1:29:00 PM Lol! You are one funny lady. But I feel bad for poor Ted. I loved the song you chose as well. Great job:-) Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/11/2021 1:37:00 PM Thanks Alexis I don;t know where this stuff comes from i do worry about myself lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Joe Dimino Date: 10/11/2021 11:08:00 AM Ouch! Funny to me...but, certain, poor Ted does not see the humor I think:) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/11/2021 1:29:00 PM thanks Joe, pure fiction... i hope!:-) hugs jan xx

Caren Krutsinger Date: 10/11/2021 10:29:00 AM :'Looseheel Ball'" This is HILARIOUS! The rest is frosting on this cake Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/11/2021 1:28:00 PM aww thanks Caren, so glad you appreciate my humour lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile Date: 10/11/2021 9:48:00 AM I admire your mind Jan! I never want to experience that condition !!! Happy Monday!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/11/2021 1:28:00 PM I worry about myself Mike lol:-) hugs jan xx Amazing what the name Lucille Ball conjured up lol:-) hugs jan xx

Michael Thompson Date: 10/11/2021 5:59:00 AM Poor poor Ted...lol Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/11/2021 1:24:00 PM Thanks Michael:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman Date: 10/11/2021 1:17:00 AM LIfe just gets better when your around. Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/11/2021 1:24:00 PM aww thanks Harry i just try and make folks smile if i can, got to say this is one of my better efforts recently lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso Date: 10/10/2021 11:48:00 PM ok ok I laughed!!!! :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/11/2021 1:23:00 PM Does that give me brownie points lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/10/2021 7:34:00 PM 'Looseheel Ball?!' -- Ha, ha, ha, ha! I thought that only Ricky Ricardo (Desi Arnaz) suffered from her -- I mean from 'that condition.' lol. Smiles, Gershon Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/11/2021 1:23:00 PM I originally wrote Lucille ball but i think the word play is better now lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin Date: 10/10/2021 7:29:00 PM A twisted ball, poor Ted. I’ll cringing awhile from this one. Well done sister! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/11/2021 1:22:00 PM lol Mark i do worry about my muse lol:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh Date: 10/10/2021 12:17:00 PM You can't keep a good man down Jan, I'm sure Ted will come again, no I mean rise again, brilliant intelligent humour at its best, cheers David Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/10/2021 2:37:00 PM thanks David I do worry about my muse lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer Date: 10/10/2021 12:09:00 PM Ha! What a clever ending, Jan! Hilarious! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/10/2021 2:36:00 PM I had such fun with this one, was only going to be the first verse then I couldnt stop lol:-) hugs jan xx

L Milton Hankins Date: 10/10/2021 12:02:00 PM oh my (chuckling) I could hardly get passed "looseheel ball!" Uh, good one, Jan, good one! He may not rise again for quite a while, period! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/10/2021 2:32:00 PM I originally had lucille ball as the word but changed it, in fact it was just one verse but I decided to extend the scene lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood Date: 10/10/2021 11:39:00 AM Ha ha, fun Jan. Reminds me of an old joke….. ‘Kenny Rogers crashed his wagon when a wheel came adrift. He ran after it singing You picked a fine time to leave me loose wheel’. ;-) Terry Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/10/2021 2:31:00 PM I remember that joke lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta Date: 10/10/2021 11:37:00 AM ...but only from that table! Thanks for the laugh! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/10/2021 2:31:00 PM lol thanks Rico:-) hugs jan xx