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Why Is the Sky Crying

Why is the sky crying? Just staring out the window watching patterns dance upon asphalt Hypnotized by the rhythm as the rain keeps pouring down Dripping in a steady stream from the roof eaves, forming puddles on the once dry surface running off to some unknown location, absorbed by the earth And I wonder - why is the sky crying? Then I look in my heart and see you are not there and I understand

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/9/2017 12:20:00 PM

This poem is sad. Raindrops are my tears.When i am not shedding them.I do understand loneliness I understand how you feel. Have a nice day my friend. Peaceand Love. My friend.

Chris Green
Date: 8/10/2017 9:11:00 AM

Thank you so very much Darlene. You are always so nice to me

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/4/2017 5:54:00 PM

Now your soup friends are crying for missing you on soup. I hope you're finding joy in taking time off here. Some peace of mind and joy to the heart... always! Hugs :) Kina

Chris Green
Date: 8/7/2017 8:46:00 AM

Thank you so very much Kina for your kind thoughts.

Maria Williams

Date: 7/15/2017 7:46:00 AM

I hope that the sky has stopped crying by now, she's there and you are having a wonderful weekend my dear friend...Maria

Chris Green
Date: 7/17/2017 8:51:00 AM

Thanks so very much Maria. A bright sunny weekend and Monday for me. :)

Darren White

Date: 7/14/2017 11:29:00 AM

Oh Mandy, well you came and you gave without taking..... could be worse :) The sky is crying here too. But I don't mind, I cried with it. Beautiful little poem. Hope she'll be there soon and the sky stops crying.

Chris Green
Date: 7/14/2017 11:41:00 AM

So was the "Mandy" for me or for Daniel? :) Thanks so much my friend.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/14/2017 10:52:00 AM

You been listening to Stevie Ray Vaughn? That is all i could think of while reading this poem. Now the song is stuck in my head:) could be worse, could've been Barry Manilow. lol Nice write, Chris:)

Chris Green
Date: 7/14/2017 11:01:00 AM

That's funny, I have had Hall and Oates "Rich Girl" stuck in my head all morning. : ) Thanks so much Daniel.