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Why Is Love Blind

I sat at the counter
drinking one too many
oblivious of those around me.
"Drowning your sorrows", she asked.
What did she know of sorrows?
"They float, you know." she said persistently.
 
I may have been drunk,
but always politically correct.
I forbore to swear.  They float.
So I couldn't drink my sorrows down.
No alcohol would erase my pain.
"What is then the antidote to sorrow?"
I solemnly inquired.
"Perhaps love?"  But that was a commodity
of which I had none.
So I could not reply 
for I wanted none of her compassion.
 
Yet somehow she persuaded me to leave,
and almost knocking her down
lurched out of the smoke-filled bar
to the inclement weather outside.
 
I still wonder why we met again,
and again.  Then we made love.
And I found some bliss 
I had never tasted before.
Until the day she died.
So I returned to the smoke filled bar.
Just to have one drink.
A toast to my dead love.
But now I swear I'll never get drunk again.
 
I pick up my old man's white stick, 
slowly make my way home,
sorrowful I could never see her face to face.
I ask myself again and again: 
why was I born blind?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Deo Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 2:21 PM
I fully agree with Lisa Ricii, bekie. Blessings & thanX Victor.
Ricci Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 7:12 AM
Dear Victor - Good Morning. This entry has many emotions and thoughts. You have the skilled ability to tell a story from beginning to end with having the reader interested from beginning to end with wanting more. Truly. Thank you for sharing. May today be a good day. Remain safe and well please. Love and Blessings always...
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 7:27 AM
A brilliant story told with your amazing talent Victor, from beginning to end. Blessings xxoo
M  Avatar
April 15, 2022 at 7:45 PM
Victor you write the most amazing poems/stories full of intrigue, romance and sadness. This poem is full of that and is just lovely….I felt really sad she died and enjoyed the surprise twist at the end…his blindness! Another Beauty Victor……Debx
Poet Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 12:19 PM
Victor, it was a lovely love affair with a wonderful, compelling story that I truly loved. It's dark, romantic, and melancholy all at once. The conclusion, on the other hand, took me by surprise. Have a fantastic day.
Boles Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 9:01 PM
A bittersweet romantic tale. Sometimes, we're blind to something staring us in the face. A wonderful write Victor...ab
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 5:19 AM
- A poem that gives many emotions ... that you are able to convey ... wonderful written, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 1:55 AM
Wonderful heartfelt romantic verse.
Seeker Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 6:36 PM
Oh wow! You are an amazing raconteur, Victor! Tragic comic romance with an unexpected twist at the end!
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 5:05 PM
that is amazing story telling, Victor. A fave.
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 1:48 PM
That was a great romantic story. I loved the ending. Well written. Blessings ~ Debra
Buehler Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 11:23 AM
A wonderful, engrossing story, Victor. It is at once brooding, romantic and sad. The ending took me by surprise, though. Have a great day, Evelyn
May Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 9:00 AM
Love's sweet bliss is seen through the mind's eye, Very nicely penned Victor
Daniel Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 7:37 AM
A heart-warming story with your trademark twist, Victor:) enjoyed:)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 5:26 AM
Always, you give us, such an enthralling story with a twist at the end.
Pandit Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 5:18 AM
Great story telling as always, Victor. The turn in the ending causes one to pause.
George Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 4:03 AM
The last line came as a surprise.... ! Now I know why the old man got out of the bar almost knocking her down, I thought it was because of his drunkenness . A poignant write, dear Victor
Skelly Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 2:01 AM
Poignant read Victor ~ Delice
Cunningham Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 1:51 AM
A sad verse of lost love and death Victor. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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