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Why I Thank God

A cartridge filled with a horde of shackled emotions, am I, Trifle feelings loiter within me... until you elicit them out, Wizened by time, you know that otherwise I might turn mordacious; Thank God I found you, my dear Muse. 04/03/17

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Date: 6/14/2017 1:51:00 PM
Well composed poem, Jo. Made great turn of phrases w/pre-selected words. Very creatively done. It's the mark of a talented poetess. Lovely inspirational poem for poets. Love always.
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Date: 4/9/2017 9:02:00 PM
Brevity combined with powerful use of the the eight words. Your imagery is full and I commend you on your placement. Excellent piece.
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Date: 4/9/2017 11:43:00 AM
Well done Jo, congratulations...
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Date: 4/9/2017 2:08:00 AM
Am impressed how you incorporated the key words into a cohesive narrative, but still managed to keep it concise. Congratulations on your First Place win.
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Date: 4/8/2017 7:42:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Jo
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Date: 4/8/2017 5:52:00 PM
Great poem, Jo! Congrats on your top win :)
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Date: 4/8/2017 5:13:00 PM
This is a very well done use of the words. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/8/2017 4:27:00 PM
Excellent use of the words brief and to the point. Congrats on a shared first place!
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Date: 4/9/2017 7:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, John:) all glory be to God Almighty alone:)
Date: 4/5/2017 4:44:00 PM
Your use of the word choices are clever, descriptive, and imaginative. Well done. Emile.
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Date: 4/5/2017 9:19:00 AM
Very well done, using the words given. My muse and I often battle to win out on how long a poem should be, I being a bit lazy, more often go for shorter poems..lol Very creative entry in that contest.. I must go look at its requirements. A7
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Date: 4/4/2017 11:48:00 PM
This is a good poem, though, I am somewhat wizened by its familiarity...Ahh, such foolish banter.
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Date: 4/4/2017 5:44:00 AM
- Happy and lovely prayer, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/3/2017 3:30:00 PM
Very nicely done, Jo. Thank goodness we can express ourselves in verse, muse or not.
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Date: 4/3/2017 1:24:00 PM
I loved this Jo. Great use of the contest words. This was fantastic and should do well...it is a winner to me.
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