Why I Need You So Lord

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written for the broken hearted those who cannot see tomorrow with a smile or have given up on hope.


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I saw that I was broken, I felt the pain
I knew the shame, there were too many games
I don't want to blame, Lord I cannot withstand this pain.
This commitment I made seemed all in vain
How I wish your hands could console my pain
For these eyes of mines are consume with rain.
Lord tell me, these words I write, shall not be in vain
Someone out there is crying out in server pain
I got to get it right, I need to be focus.
Why are these words sounding so hopeless
God I feel so worthless
Jealousy and pride has me breathless.
My head is pounding
My heart is bursting
God I can't take this everyday suffering.

    

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Date: 4/16/2018 8:00:00 PM
It's comforting to know that the Lord hears our cries. He knows all about suffering as he endured humanity's suffering on the cross. You are never alone, even when you feel alone. Poetic hugs, Juliet
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Date: 4/17/2018 4:59:00 PM
thank you
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Date: 4/17/2018 4:59:00 PM
thank you