Why I Can'T Write

I have carved seventeen years into this notebook
Dragging Mondays across the paper
Saturdays exploding from the nib

It is not enough now
To take a hair from his head and rest it on a page
Sacrificing my heart to the wind
Praying she might not take it from me

It is not enough now
To take a reflection of his smile and scatter it across these sordid lines
In the hope that they might trap it for me
And not keep it for themselves

I want to pen myself into him
Carve myself deep into his skin
Curl into myself
And live there
In the space between his heart and lungs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Taylor Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 7:14 PM
Congrats on 1st Place, Gracie. Nice going. luv Ralph
Jane Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 6:54 PM
Loved this... I know exactly how this feels X
Sweetheart Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 3:01 PM
Congrats Gracie on your first place win with this fantastic poetry luv..enjoy top billing...
Taylor Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 10:38 AM
Congrats on your win, Gracie. Nice going. xxxRalph
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 10:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian Strand's contest "Aspects Of Love" contest Gracie. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 6:19 PM
enjoyed your work....hope you have a great week and can write this great again. Welcome to the soup....what soup would you be?
Magee-Dittberner Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 1:32 PM
I beg to differ, you can indeed write...quite well at that. You're going to be one heck of a good sorrowful poet one day in the near future. Great poem, very familiar feelings, well written. Good job.
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