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Why Do I Go On Loving - Suriyaki Contest

Why do I go on loving, When you no longer love me, My heart just died When you walked, walked away from me, What will I do? How will I live? Without your love to see me through. How can I stop the heartache, How can you live without me, so much in love thought our love would last forever. Where did it go? Why did it go? Darling I miss your kisses so. We were very young and so much in love, Now we are alone what went wrong, Tell me please. How can I stop tears falling In dreams I hear you calling But all my fears wash away with each falling tear Am I to blame Life’s not the same Darling I miss your touches so Whistling……. Lovers walk by I break down and cry Remembering just how we used to be We were so in love and as time went by love just seemed to fade to fade and die Where are you now my love my arms just long to hug you to hold you close not to ever let go again I love you so I miss you so Please, oh please come back to me Please, oh please come back to me Penned on 18 August 2015 Music: Suriyaki

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Date: 8/26/2015 10:00:00 AM
What a wonderful entry, Seren !! Listening to the music along with your perfect lyrics !! I can tell you put your heart into this one! Congratulations!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2015 10:20:00 AM
Thanks Carrie congrats to you also. I enjoyed writing the lyrics...Seren
Date: 8/25/2015 10:30:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb win Seren with this awesome pen! An emotive gem!
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Date: 8/25/2015 1:13:00 PM
sweet win... SKAT
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2015 10:23:00 AM
Thx Skat....Seren
Date: 8/18/2015 3:44:00 PM
oh Seren I got a lump in my throat reading this - good luck in the contest it is truly a beautiful poem! Hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/18/2015 11:29:00 PM
jadazzle reigns again hooray thanks for the lovely comment Jan ....Seren
Date: 8/18/2015 3:30:00 PM
Beautiful piece, intense, and emotions are felt throughout, Thank you for sharing, Tanya
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/18/2015 11:30:00 PM
Tanya for visiting my work, thanks also for your comment...Seren

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