Why Can'T My Mirror Understand

Why can’t my mirror understand
                               Just what I really need
I look and look and hope and hope
                                No matter how I plead

I still am seeing what I am
                               Not what I want to see
When hair was of a chestnut brown
                                 The way it used to be

When skin aroused a velvet touch
                              And not a map of crepe
With eyelids smiling, opened wide
                                Without adhesive tape

This mirror cost me quite a bit
                         That magic shop downtown
Had promised gaze of pure delight
                            Not this depressing frown

I feel so swindled, yes I do
                        And here’s what else I think
That just in case, I signed that check
                                 With disappearing ink

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 11/21/2023 4:33:00 PM
A fun read, my clever poet, friend. I liked it! I want to congratulate you on your poem being published in the latest edition of Poetry Soup's Anthologies! YEAH !!! I also want to wish you a happy Thanksgiving, Mike. Have a great Thursday! Bill
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/25/2025 4:55:00 AM
Thanks so much Bill!!!
Date: 10/16/2023 7:27:00 PM
Very thoughtful. There are some who really feel this way.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/17/2023 4:18:00 AM
Thank you so much!!
Date: 10/16/2023 4:20:00 AM
Love this, Mike. The third stanza especially because I own a small tape business called "Adhesive Tape" (lol) Your poems always flow so nice...great writing. Have a nice week! Charlie
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/17/2023 4:18:00 AM
And a nice week to you Charlie, thank you always for your kind words !!!
Date: 10/15/2023 2:23:00 PM
Ask Maleficent where she gets hers…. Maybe? Mirror. Mirror on Mike’s wall
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/15/2023 5:32:00 PM
Will do, thank you Lin xxoo
Date: 10/15/2023 1:05:00 PM
Ha. Good luck to the check casher. Lol. Good poem about the perception of aging.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/15/2023 5:29:00 PM
Thank you Karen!!
Date: 10/15/2023 12:38:00 PM
A very amusing poem Mike. Very clever. The last two lines are brilliant. Made me smile. There’s loads of women products I should have taken back. Maybe I could borrow the pen for future useless purchases! Thank you for sharing. :):)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/15/2023 5:29:00 PM
Any time!! Thank you so much Christina!!
Date: 10/15/2023 10:09:00 AM
ha ha ha the ending is quite hilarious but stay as you are.. no reaching for the 'just for men' as I love men with greying hair and smiling eyes ! hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/15/2023 11:32:00 AM
yes deffo lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/15/2023 11:25:00 AM
How about smiling blue eyes Jan ? lol !!! Happy Sunday xxoo
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