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Why can not the leaves Raise up to the sky...instead.. Of falling to the ground

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Ndidzulafhi Patric

Date: 12/9/2017 5:07:00 AM

very nice poem

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/9/2017 1:26:00 PM

Hello Patric, thank you for your lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/28/2017 9:35:00 AM

Quite creative and original--very well articulated, Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/4/2017 8:21:00 PM

Hello Vijay,thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice evening my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/17/2017 7:14:00 PM

I enjoyed this one. I can relate to this completely. There are so many here and this year , I didn't even get them done before the snow fell! Great poem Darlene :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/17/2017 7:48:00 PM

Thank you Heidi, there are still more leaves to be raked,if only the maple tree would hurry up and shed all of its leaves would be nice. Have a nice evening my friend.

Solomon Ochwo-Oburu

Date: 11/13/2017 3:56:00 AM

You have said the ordinary in a highly wise way. How do I understand this? Thanks

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/13/2017 7:09:00 AM

The leaves fall to the ground from the trees in autumn. We must rake them up from the lawn, I just wish the leaves would raise up to the sky instead, so we don't have to rake them up. That is what I meant. Have a good day my friend.